Black Poetry : Let the rain come down

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ctorietella, Apr 25, 2006.

  1. Ctorietella

    Ctorietella New Member MEMBER

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    I'm going to stand by my man no matter what,
    Can't walk away when times are rough,
    Love his dirty draws when all is well,
    Love them just the same when things don't gel.

    The elders say "to everything a little rain must fall"
    That's just nourishment to the dry weak places, that's all.
    It's storming outside...rain on! Father God, Let the rain come down!
    Rain on those seeds that was planted on good ground!

    Some thorns have been planted along the way,
    We will reap those seeds also, maybe as early as today.
    Rain on! Father God, Let the rain come down!

    Rain on rejection, wash it away,
    Rain on bad health, it can't stay,
    Rain on fear, you didn't give us that,
    Rain on! Father God, Let the rain come down!

    Rain on my man make him strong,
    Give him a new motivation to continue on.
    Walk with him in every step,
    No doubt you'll be with him, you were with Jesus when he wept.
    Rain on! Father God, Let the rain come down!


    A.K.A
    Ireadastory
     
  2. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love and devotion rain down on this piece, poet. I'm feelin' ya flow.
    One love
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop, I love the emotion in this piece it was like a prayer and a blessing that just poured out of your soul.:welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let to pour in cyrstal drops .....tyte flow

    welcome within the poetic family
    welcome to destee.com the house of peace & respect
    welcome from above as i bless this piece some love
     
  5. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    C - Unique and vibrant. Gives rain a voice to baptize us in staying power. Very nicely done. HH
     
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