Quiet Poetry Lounge : Let the Flirt Work

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Dec 11, 2003.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh..
    There she is.
    I wonder what she'd do if I approached her.
    Would she accept my advances or give me the cold shoulder?
    Look me up & down without givin' me a reply.
    Exhale impatiently & slowly roll her eyes.
    But there's only 1 way 4 me 2 be certain.
    I have 2 try, otherwise this lonely heart couldn't take much more
    of the constant yearnin' & hurtin'.

    Look at her, her beauty's flawless, I know she wouldn't want me.
    She's like a succubus from my dreams materialized into reality.
    Such a wonderfully splendid specimen of woman,
    she looks like an angel on earth.
    I bet the heavens rejoiced & the ground quaked
    on the day of her birth.
    How happy I'd be if she told me she found me attractive.
    My soul would jump 4 joy & do multiple backflips
    & finish in a split.

    Hey, did she just look at me?
    Wow, there she goes again!
    This time I held her gaze & she acknowledged me with a grin.
    Okay...
    Get your words together.
    Gotta be confident...
    Can't stutter or stammer.
    I hope I have a stick of gum so my breath will be pleasant.
    Steady my nerves, hold my head up,
    stick my chest out & start steppin'.

    Okay...
    here we go.
    Don't rush,
    take it nice & slow.
    I get closer & she keeps lookin' at me...
    her eyes are so lovely.
    If I get her, I'll place her on a golden pedestal above me.
    Finally I'm standing by her side...
    She looks up at me & flashes a heavenly smile.
    I clear my throat & flash one back...
    Hi, I've been watchin' U 4 a while...
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    nice work continue on
    with the flow...likes ta
    know what happens...
    nice flirt work....:angel1:
     
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    aw this is so cute. (tight flow, too) I agree that the pain of not ever tryin is far worse than takin the risk. hope you got a date, PM. :glasses:
     
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    i'm curious now...
    you finally cleared your throat and spoke
    i know she smiled..
    what then... what then
    you kept me moving with you...
    kept me hanging on to each word..it flowed so well
    and so i say..
    what happened next...hey what then
     
  5. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank U all 4 checkin' & diggin', but...

    It never happened.

    Just an image in the mind of Positive.

    Now y'all got me wantin' 2 continue.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome scribe da works of it
    and the mindset of it deep image
    flow on
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just an image in the mind of Positive.
    please continue.....part 2
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, I was smiling all thru this. It had a a very real feel to it...Awaiting part 2.
     
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    oh yes
    that flirt
    :)
    Peace
     
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