Black Poetry : Let Me...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by unfoolish1223, Mar 31, 2004.

  1. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me show you how wonderful
    love can truly be...let our souls
    touch so we can become one...
    let me take you to the heavens
    where you deserve to be...let me
    explore your mind, body and soul,
    take you deep in my heart because
    theres no better place u could
    ever be...let me show you that
    you are what God made for me...
    let me lay my head on your chest
    and hear your heart beat...let me
    explore your body with my finger tips...
    let me give you pleasure like you never
    felt before...let me take you to pure ecstasy...
    let me hear all your desires, dreams,
    and fears...when you cry let me
    wipe your tears...when your down
    let me pick you up...when your
    scared let me ease your fears...
    let me make everything alright...take
    you in my arms and hold you
    so tight...love is truly a blessing
    one that u should share with me....
    I been feeling you since
    the first day I ever laid eyes on you
    so just let me love you...
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello,...and welcome...
    you have entered a family like none other....

    Your poem was :hot: ...and my guess is whoever you wrote this to ...will be at your beck and call...who wouldn't want to have and feel that kind of love...
    I see a lot of :flirt: ing in the air...
    keep up the good work.
     
  3. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much for the love and hopefully that person will want the same thing and let me show them that love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hoping it works out for ya. And, by the way, this was just wonderful.
     
  5. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thanks a lot for the love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was rapture it perfection
    indeed i can lay in dis all night
    flow on lovin it
     
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    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: for the love