Black Poetry : Let ME touch U

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    May I my loveth
    touch u their
    if you don't mine
    can i just
    u know !
    touch u their
    where only a
    man stelleo go
    can i touch ya
    ta' ta's
    as we lay
    under da glist
    of love visioning
    da glare above
    as i touch ya
    na' na
    can i ma' ma
    touch u their
    in my bare nakedness
    can i touch u
    to a warm embrace
    and feel da smile to
    ya face
    can i touch ya
    heart and instill
    my love
    can i touch u
    sweet lady
    in my arm of
    shelter to comfort u
    can i touch ya
    secret treasure
    caress it wit
    tender meassure
    fulfill ya desire of
    pleasure and if u
    don't mine tonight
    can i pose this love
    leave my rose and
    say i love u beloveth
    can i touch u their
    deep in ya soul
    kiss ya mental as grace
    unfold as i stroll ya body
    can i touch ya essence
    to mask da orbs of ya
    beauty and float into
    our own existance of
    bliss so lady if u don't
    mine can i touch u
    :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2: :hearts2:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The way this flowed, it felt as though each line built upon the one before it. Such a powerful caress, able to touch the very soul of your loved one. This was one mesmerizing piece brotha, flow on.
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My brother....i often wonder if the flow of your pen will ever be slowed...but then God told me that if it idid HIS work would not be fulfilled...

    flow on poet...i need your voice today...

    one.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby,
    touch my soul
    touch my inner spirit
    touch me here there
    and everywhere
    baby your my magic man
    i love when you touch like that
    oh yeah touch my heart
    feel my soul move
    embrace your love
    my treasure will
    complete you
    in every measure
    without a notion
    motions rise
    and emotions flow
    so touch me
    touch me.....

    well now i love the vibe...but i think ya can tell
    sweetly laid...it moved me baby...(smile)

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz watz as i drap the canvas in hope

    Thankz Mr. D surely the whispers of heaven's keep me going until completion
    my voice of roar
     
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    Angel ...........
    manifested love
    from the heaven's above
    cascading deep within
    sweet moment hearts
    command so my dear
    have no fear for i am
    the land of peace
    let me touch ya treat
    fulfill ya fantasy
    let me touch da core
    of ya soul as it wrap
    around my body
    let me touch ya mind
    to a divine warmth
    mentally as our spirits
    dance in the essence
    of released beauty
    let me kiss ya thoughts
    as we make new life
    let me just today if u don't mine
    mold the handz in grace
    as enter ya secret place
    let me just touch u !
     
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    Heaven doors open
    And the love pours
    Sweet moments of the heart
    Take my fears away
    For my tears run of joy
    In this land of peace
    Your touch..
    Soothes my soul
    Relaxes the mind
    Compassion ally
    My release is
    A warm divine
    As the essence of us dance
    Of the embrace beauty
    Kiss my thoughts
    Take my core to rapture
    Above the skies
    Enhance the senses
    If only for today
    Touch me like never before
     
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    as i touch
    tenderly
    i confess
    openly
    gentle
    warm
    embrace
    tracin
    tears
    kissin
    fears
    just let
    me
    touch u
    their
    feel u
    here
    and
    make
    it bright
    to a new
    sunny day
    light as we
    take flyte on
    da wings of
    LOVEEEEE!
    angel cakes
     
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    Touch me
    As I confess
    Moan
    Sway
    Release
    Trace me
    Openly
    Gently
    Feel me
    Closely
    Lovely
    Desirable
    Maze as we linger in da sun
    Upon the moon
    In heaven eyes…
    Love me
    Emotionally
    Spiritually
    Soulfully
    Everlastingly
    Take me
    Compassion ally
    Tender ally
    Mental ally
    Baby I am yours
    Honey bun sweet
    Love of mine
    Touch me
    ………touch me
    As I touch you back….
     
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    let me touch u
    and i feed my
    mesmerizable
    sweetness
    to embrace u
    soulfully whole
    and stroll deep
    to tame ya spirit
    caress ya mind
    mentally as we
    dance when i
    touch u there
    if u don't mine
    and speak softly
    in golden whispers
    touching u to da
    core as we motion
    down to da floor
    under the glist of
    lights looking upon
    da star so bright
    weave a wool in the
    spool of my hand
    if i can touch u
    to love u right
    make ya soul take
    flyte cross da
    domain of my heart
    just let me lady
    touch u today
    for an angel embrace
     
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