Black Poetry : Let Me Tell You In Words

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 20, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your love is like the high moons shadows
    And deep into the night
    You are the cold breeze
    That chills the air yet smells so clean
    Like rain you drizzle into the aftermath
    And create a situation too complex that there is no solution
    Only devestating results conflicting
    It's like the water runs dry
    From a well
    Where I used to be filled
    And the memories are fragrant like sweet perfume
    And the memories just are
    The sand that squished between our toes and the waves that washed away the dirt
    Is where my heart remains
    Like a compass
    My heart reflects back to you
    Aching with the pains of hunger and I am thirsty and craving you
    Like delicious collard greens, potatoes and fried chicken
    Your flavor is so unforgettable
    Every hour I wait
    Like a best friend
    Waiting to tell you a secret
    Ready to play outside
    Waiting to be relieved
    You take my breathe away
    And my feelings are so unsure if they should speak
    Everytime I get around you I feel weak
    Kiss the sky
    How high the moon
    How much I love you
    Splashing the puddles
    My reflection I do see
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GURL NOW I HAD TO SIT BACK AND TAKE DIS IN
    WOOOWEEEE!!!!!!
    SLOW DOWN STORM YA PULLING ME IN FAST !!
    I LOVE DIS
     
  3. Ladysoul

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    Absolutely amazing...I am speechless!
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx poets i learned from the best , my afro/destee fam!!!!!! thank you
     
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    storm, u came real hard with this one. love the imagery.
    good work poet. stay in....

    b.e.z.
    hw
     
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