Quiet Poetry Lounge : Let Me Take You There....(EnTeRlUdE)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PlayWitItPimp05, Jul 21, 2003.

  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **********imagine************

    The hammock's strings are tickling my senses
    The wind blows peace throughout the hair in my kitchen
    It calms me like the fumes of a hot bath
    It loves me like the touch of my lover's hands
    It makes me unwind into a place in time
    And think about things that even the earth has not seen
    It makes me believe in the witchcraft of magnanimity
    And it winds me up like the puppet is wound by his strings....
    All I can do is think....

    **********imagine************

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  2. LibertyLady

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    aww iiiiiiiii love this short piece but strong....but fresh


    pimpy you made me glimpy....


    much love liby
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet short loveable flow u displayed
    tyte
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Long on Imagination and Heart! Thanks!
     
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    this is very nice play
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Play, :wave:

    This is a very sweet and beautifully posed piece!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  7. Alizentang

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    Play my gurl....I wonderedd where you dissapeared to...you over here relaxing:)

    This was a ver beautiful piece. What else would we expect from the Pimpstress. LOL

    Much Love to you boo
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *promply exhales* dayum. that was a wonderful poem gurl loved it

    one love,
    -story
     
  9. triniti424

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    :) .....imagining.... :)
    lol
    right on play :)