Black Poetry : Let me take u there

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Dec 21, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Let me take ya there
    to a place so large
    caress ya body
    comfort ya heart

    tell i love u
    make u mines
    enter ya solo mind

    let me confess
    a bliss
    sex u up wit
    tenderness

    show u passion
    of a twist
    hold u wit
    affectioness

    embrace ya soul
    forever hold
    keep u warm
    from da cold
    as i stroll ya love
    uncover wit a hug

    dance deep inside
    ya world and rock
    yo sway to a curl
    swriling in my zone
    and four finger roam

    let me take u there
    to a place wit gentle
    care mesmerize ya
    humble love hold u
    like two doves
    as we sit low
    by da fireplace
    tracing ya face
    wit goodness & grace

    let me take u there ...
    :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv: :luvv:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Just reading it, took some of us there...thanks for the ride
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Queentswana
    the real ride is
    when i take u there
    Thankz sis.........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like quite a place to be taken to, beyond a state of mind, an out of body trek, this kind. A close encounter of the erotic kind. Enjoyed the flow brotha.
     
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    if i take u there
    u will be a no return
    a yearn that burn
    a bliss of my mix
    if i take u there
    it would be beyond compare

    Thankz watz .............peace
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay $$RICH$$ ...it's on, saddle up :horse:
    hahaha
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    take me there.....love the vibe....Angel
     
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    wow really nice. It gave me goosebumps.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah rich this is nice bu tlet me drop a little reality up in here

    Life about to fall apart on my way to Wal-mart and its all dark

    A loose night can produce fright glock in my dash in case a rock

    Smash my windshield, carry a grenade that vary and persuade slop

    Talk to stop in a raw attempt saw pimp in a Cadillac ballistic drop top

    Armed with facts and statistics hot, bent season but present reasons

    Arguing over a girl targeting my whole world for frustration and treason

    Quiet strange how the light change took a right turn on Indian River road

    Got Benjamin’ to deliver by the load, my bling corrupt like an X-file code

    But problems spring up so complex and wild like toads

    See a true cutie start to view her booty it’s true duty to do so
     
  10. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby it'sw been a long time i had to do it to ya