Black Poetry : Let me take control of you for a moment

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me lay you down gentle lover
    Hold you tightly and make love to ya
    Bite ya ear, grind on top of you,
    making it clear ta ya
    That my love's devine, my body sure to give ya pleasure
    I'll freak ya so good, you'll shake in the bed after i'm done like a seizure
    The name is juicy, let me lead you to your pleasure
    It Nice to meet ya

    i'll be happy to make this night a night to remember
    Candles lit in the bedroom, makin ya body sexier
    Rose pedals on the bed, makin our sex better
    Let me roll on top of ya, sweat forming, as my sex gets wetter
    Let me lead ya
    Take control of ya
    Be rough with ya
    And down right freaky with ya
    I might just be a girl in ya mind but tonight I'll prove why I'm a woman to ya

    I picked out the best R&B CD with everything from R.kelly's "Bump and Grindin"
    to Tyrese "Signs of Love Makin"
    Cause in actuality that's what we doing
    Cause tonight I want to hear ya moanin
    And if it's real good, I want to hear yo groanin'
    Come on let me roam ya
    Play with ya mind for a moment
    As I lick ya from head to toe for a second
    Don't rush, be patient
    Cause tonight I'm so determined
    Hear me???
    I want to take control of ya for a moment

    Let me massage ya back
    Lotions and Oils, can you believe that?
    I got that.....
    I rock that.....
    I want to do that......
    Hear that??
    That's my heart beating because I can't want to start that
    You ready for that?

    After that I want to kiss ya deeply in the mouth
    And head down south
    Where I want to insert you in my dark mouth
    Grip ya tightly and take you in
    Up and down while grippin my soft breast which start bouncin'
    I want to grind my deep pucci on top of ya round and round
    I want to prove like TLC why I want to be down
    As I hear that sound......that moan sound
    That softly escapes ya lips
    As I make soft dips
    I want to make you whipped
    Feel my grip.....my lips

    I want to turn around and stick that @ss up for you
    Let you hit it from the back, it's just for you
    Slowly at first and then at a rhythm made just for you
    I want to be one with you
    Feel ya
    Be real with ya
    As I tighten my pucci around you
    let me take control of you.....
    That's just a sample of what I can do to you....
    The rest is what comes naturally when I do you......
    Just say yes to letting me take control of you......
    Well at least for a moment......
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its cool kraze baby you can have me
    but my baby might get mad-lol
    this was a very sexy and sensual drop
    from tyrese to me I mean that person saying yes
    you put a lot into this-with some pedals on the bed
    8/10
    uno
    keep up the good work
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...deep flow poet, gee whiz...don't hurt'em
    I' ain't mad at cha ...^5
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umm umm ummm he ain't ready for you to put it on him like that poet....tyte drop that was :bullseye: :welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out Lyricks i might come looking for ya ...lol
    this was red hot sis.
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks family for feeling this here. I wrote it because lately I haven't had anyone to give my love to so this just popped out of my mind like sand. Easy and hot. lol:spin:
     
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    and it sounds like sista you've been hitting Joe up with them Love Scenes enjoyed the write my sis. and sis since you love short stories Im working on Sinful Lust if you like come check it out. Sounds so real folks swear im writing about my life http://blog.myspace.com//nevar112. keep them stories coming sis too. :welldone:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No I haven't seen them but I'm about to go and check them out now. I know that I'm in for a treat. Thanks sista for feeling this. Love ya, peace
     
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