Black Poetry : Let me spoon ya this apple*pie

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Slivered up, sliced up…apple*pie

    Golden Delicious, make them big boi’s cry

    Buttered up crust, moist and never dry

    Sprinkled wit that sugar, no teasin’ on the side

    Homemade pie, to tha store I never buy

    Manufactured products, not me, I never tried

    Oven baked, conversate, icecream on the side

    Caramel whispers, no time for slip and slide

    Hit ya with the stickiness, make ya look cockeyed

    Daddy's feelin' dizzy, from tha swaying of my thighs

    Even Adam can't deny, the apple’s of my eyes

    Red Delish, Gala, and Fuji …they never lie

    Sour Granny Smith, I’m sorry I don’t comprise

    Open up ya mouth, here comes my apple*pie




    Come here Daddy, Let me spoon ya!


    :SuN030:




    4*28*08
     
  2. Clyde C Coger Jr

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    sweet apple*pie,
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    Girl, you need to quit it, that's too real. Make a man actually taste the pie. You are just too young to be knowing, its got to be God's gift, use it sweet apple*pie.

     
  3. HODEE

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    Nice

    I like this flow
    Apple of my eye
    Sweet apple*pie


    Nice sweetapple*pie
    Mouth all Open wide.
    I can't wait to let
    The sweet apple*pie slide

    All over the mouth
    Sprinkle a little cinnamon
    Slide some off my chest
    Sticky sweet apple*pie
    Licking the edges
    Finger measures
    Putting my fingers into the hot center

    You be hot
    Melting the Chocolate Ice Cream​
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a creatively sultry poetic romp. Well written piece, that I'm sure the brothers will appreciate. :) And a spicy flowback from Hodee as well.
     
  5. LovesDestiny

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    That was hot Sis Sweet!!! Great flow!!!
     
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    hmmm....

    a spoon fed dish of tempting delights...apple pie a la mode by moon light...i mean spoon feed me the blessings of your...efforts.

    AND THE RIVER FLOWS.
     
  7. Jahari Kavi

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    Say whaaaaaaaaa???????????
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!




    Jahari Kavi,

    See! You do know what I'm saying:)! That's God's mundane gift to Man, better add the vice versa:)!

     
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    Go head apple pie with this sensual slice…
    show ’em Betty ain’t the only one cookin’


    Nice flow!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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    my mouth is open

    i can't lie
    i like sweet apple pie
    with ice cream on top
    while the pie still hot
    how can you resist
    the temptation of sweet apple pie on your lips
    slice wit da sugar no teasin' yea don't flip
    dizzy from the swaying thighs i hold the sweet pie apple
    firm in my hand with a very strong grip

    :tongue:
     
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