Black Poetry : Let Me Make Real Love To You

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’d love to touch you in the
    most intimate way that a man
    and woman can share but...

    only if you allow me to

    For you see,
    I cannot
    waste your time
    nor
    my own
    with a casual need to make love;
    you mean much more to me than that

    This feeling
    I have to make love to you
    rises above an ordinary feeling;
    since
    I want to make love to your heart
    in the most
    pristine way

    &

    effect a conjugality
    of our endearing souls

    Much like an immaculate
    connection when two people
    love intimately...
    all the while
    devoid of lust

    Let me then delve deep within
    the flavor that the softness of
    your womanhood quietly offers me

    Come with me
    as we soar to a higher plateau
    Empowered by the strength
    of my vitality;
    enamored by its own tenderness

    Forever realize
    that the love I seek to make with you
    is
    undeniably heartfelt;
    shrouded in passion;
    affectionately pure
    and most of all

    R~E~A~L...

    ©GQINC2K3

     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "...real love, I'm searchin for a real love...someone to give my heart to.." - Mary J. Blige

    This is something I'd want from a quality gentleman.
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ!!! Handle the bizness son!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed Q on da love vibe fire !
    man work da V-Day
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You da man! And I mean it baby! You be DADA of LOVE right here!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    you always express words of love in a way that tell me it is the most beautiful emotion two people can share....

    K
     
  7. strgblkwoman

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    The Music of Your Soul

    When innermost thoughts are revealed through expression, the expression is usually deeper than the surface of one's intellect. Yet the intellect in itself is so powerful and so thought-provoking that when one has the ability to awaken passion within depths of one's soul and pour out that passion melodiously, the words flow with a rhythm and melody so beautiful that its music removes all void and replaces the fullness like no other song can. Your poetry is like a sweet song that comforts and brings with it great expectation. Keep singing through your poetry. Your CD is surely in the making.
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful piece!


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gq,

    maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan don't hurt 'em! you have this smooth thing perfected. save some for me brother. don't be greedy Lol.

    blak
     
  10. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is dope

    lovin how u presented it too with the blue and centering

    nice
     
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