Quiet Poetry Lounge : Let Me Make It Right

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetress07, Feb 5, 2006.

  1. Poetress07

    Poetress07 New Member MEMBER

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    Let me make it right for all the wrongness I have done
    Let me full your body with pleasure and then with fun
    Let me make our bodies entwine as one
    Because I want to make up everything with love
    Let me take away all away the hurt and the frustration you may have
    Because what has happened is now in the past
    Just let me work on you so I can make our love last
    Let me make it right by giving you kisses that is very soft and tender
    Let me ignite that fire in your eyes with lots of splendor
    Let me unfold all of your secrets and your deepest darkest fear
    You don’t have to worry any more because with you now I am here
    Let me make it right by fixing every promise I have broken
    And with that take my heart as a token
    Let it symbolize the words that have been unspoken
    Let me be the one you can call your one and only
    Let me make up for the times you have felt lonely
    Let me make it right by not only words but in actions too
    Let me show you that I only love you
    Let me receive all the love you have to offer and give
    Let us enjoy this because you only have one life to live
    Let me make it right this day right now because it’s now or never
    Let me take our love to a whole new height and a whole new level
    Turn off the lights because baby you know it’s been a while
    What I have to give will turn your frown into a smile
    Let me hold you and touch you just the way you like
    Let me show you that I will never want to let you out my sight
    And when we are finished, have your body feeling full of delight
    So baby, will you give me a chance to make it right?[/FONT]

    ~Poetress07~:kiss1:
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful Poet
    Iloved this from beginning to end
    Much Love to you and welcome
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, making it right is the only way to go. This was a beautiful piece poet...
    Allow me the pleasure of saying...Welcome to our home...which is now yours too, you will enjoy your stay here, relax, make yourself at home...because you are.
    join us in chat for conversation, music, class and more...www.destee.com/chat
    Again, welcome aboard.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic expression
    welcome to the house of peace & love
    welcome from above as i bless this some love

    making it right , confession from the heart
    so beautiful so yes u can and forgiven .....
    i enjoyed this much , i could have flowed here
    making it all right and fulfilling the warmth of yesterday
    Tyte poetic drop

    welcome Poetress07
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sounded so earnest, and the words were just beautiful. Welcome to Destees.
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful .
     
  7. Sassysammy

    Sassysammy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** **** **** ****!!!!! I got u Poetress07 u kno who dis iz but I can hate from one poet to another dat wuz tight gurl!!!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a tyte write flo on.
     
  9. Poetress07

    Poetress07 New Member MEMBER

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    Thanx SassySammy, I tol ya dat I had talent
     
  10. Poetress07

    Poetress07 New Member MEMBER

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    And thanx everybody for the compliments, it was my first time ever posting a poem, I'm glad you all enjoyed it! Much love.
     
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