Black Poetry : LET ME LIVE (UnBorn cry)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mother !
    let me live
    don't let me die
    please mom
    hear my tiny cry

    Let me live in you
    don't do the unthinkable
    my father what it too
    i may have not , see
    been in your plan

    I promise not be
    another statistic
    to da greediness
    of the white man
    please mother understand

    I have my place in life
    God gift this miracle birth
    he has plans you're see
    let me live , let it be
    this about you and me

    I may seem like a tissue
    or what man calls fetus
    but my tiny heart beats
    with five fingers & toes
    when i'm born da warmth beholds

    I want to be loved within u
    i want to see light of truth
    i want to live my days
    hear me mom rejoice & praise
    for the gift u was gave

    I heard your cry in silent nights
    that's held deep inside , within
    i'm not perfect , i may bring pain
    one in your arms , it will be to name
    the scars may run deep to numb

    Let me live to view the sun
    carry starz and cross moons
    cherish, love and sing world tunes
    a chance to grow , to learn & yearn
    i'm more then a blood clot or mistake
    let me live
    let me live
    let me live
    Mother please ! please ! please !:cry:

    pt.2 coming next!!!!

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    To Every mother to be and the life of the unborn
    allow thy child a chance , a place to exist in life
    hands down to abortion thumbs up to new birth.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this reminds of nick cannon song love the concept of this. flo on with this realization rich.:smooch:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang dat was deep my bratha
    i was feelin it and yea and did remine me of nick cannon too...lol
    very nice piece
    so im now waitin 4 pt2



    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz a million Nevar for the love and visit on this motherly cry of plea.


    Thankz a million GhettoAmbition for the warmth of feeling what unborn feels
    and lone to live beyond abortion........
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Write of the right to life with a clear conscious, brother, for to live, is to give.

    MUCH RESPECT!
     
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    tight one rich thanks for shining your light on this subject.
     
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    Once again you have shined light on a subject that is often left on the back burner in our community. I really love how you address poetically issues that need to be exposed. Nice flo cuz.
     
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    word up 1poet taken a stand for human life and rights to live thankz.

    black_soul it have to be said so many unborns are striped from life
    without a chance in many kinds of situation big thankz

    too often over looked and life taken by the hands of thy mother
    allow them the same chance in life as we all have to complete
    the circle , that's yet broken so bad children are jewels a gift and
    something to praise and watch bloom and blossome thankz a million asimplepoet
     
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    $$RICH$$...........

    :angel1: :spinstar:
     
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    weeping in the despair of so many unborn not getting a chance to live.
    these are jewels , Gods gift , a human soul , a heart , thy child
    when will it end , where do i start to end this destruction of hope for life
    thankz sista spicybrown
     
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