Black Poetry : LET ME LIVE (UnBorn Cry pt.2)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Too da clinic once again
    taken this trip of unpleasured sin
    to this woman/man doctor no friend
    to kill da live one bare within
    let me live, i plea again

    Hear my cry, don't let me die
    i'm not a choice to make
    in the mist of passion i'm no mistake
    don't call me a fetus, i'm your child
    growing from deep inside

    O' Mother i love you so
    how we bond as we grow
    when you burp it tickles me
    and when u eat u feed me see
    and when u stress i can't rest

    Let me live to see the light
    i know mom, the world ain't right
    those people wanna kill me
    it up to you so put up a fight
    the pain i bring is a happy delight

    Don't worry if daddy not there
    don't worry if you jobless in fear
    don't worry if you feel too young
    don't worry go head spill a tear
    i'll be the joy in ya heart to bare
    just let me live in tender lovin care

    It's sinful the act of devils deed
    to kill and destroy what ya soul breeds
    like the rich soil to bloom life
    i may be your very only
    so let me live you're never be lonely
    don't go down that forbidden field
    for the to strip and kill

    Mother please hear my cry
    let me live without exclamation
    don't abandon me
    heed from the pleasure u felt
    when u weave this web of debt
    mandate the obligation of commitment
    please, please, please !

    Mother
    let me live, let me feel
    let me dream,let me scream
    let me behold, don't go cold
    i am your harvest friut
    God permit me to instill in you

    Mother i plea !
    through thy womb i rise
    to live out infanthood of surprise
    beyond the myth and lashing lies
    upon you we view through eyez
    hold ya head up in pride
    forth i am life, the truth, don't hide
    let me live from da swell inside .:crying:

    Mother's to be give thy chance to live help close the doors of
    abortion clinics and stop the sin of sinnerstersto kill life most of
    all your child thy unborn elegant treasure within you it was GODS
    doing not yours to disagree is to turn your back on thy master above
    when he's ready he'll call thy child home, not for you to say or judge
    for judgement day is his let thy child da unborn live a life as thee.....


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  2. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang my bratha rich dat was very deep and emotional
    but very well true, too many young gurls gettin pregnant, and having a lot of fear which cuz dem to kill derr baby, but only if they wud c having a baby as a beautiful thing and not as a sin, all those who r in dat situation, im prayin 4 dem 2nite, much luv
    luv da drop so flo on



    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$......

    So painful it is to see a soul go to waste without having a chance to experience life, its god-given birthrite. A nightmare indeed it is.

    Brother $$RICH$$, the thought of it makes me want to.......:puke2:
     
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    Thankz sistas , it's deep and heartbreaking to see these clinics
    the house of devils to destroy , kill and smile about it leaving a
    pain a scare not only to the heart but on life itself , these unborns
    should have a rite to live a life as each one of us do and have but
    they cut short in millions daily from unwanted Mothers , deadbeat dads
    who care less and by the hands of another human being

    JUDGEMENT DAY IS NEAR !
     
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    Oh, how did i miss that there was a part 2. As one of these unplanned and unwanted children I have to say thanks again for so eloquently shining the light on this subject. Thank God my mother choose life (adoption) not abortion.
     
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    And what a blessing because she gave birth to a POET
    and child of heart and full of love , i too give thankz to my
    mother for giving me a chance / a place to live and grow
    and not thinking of the killing fields call clinics for abortion..

    Thankz for the read and visit w/ luv asimplepoet
     
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    Let me live , the sad cry of da womb !
    revisit for life .
     
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    this poem has spoke to me...Lord knows how many times ive contemplated this over the past 3 months because ive been so scared...i was a person who said i would NEVER do that...but once ur put in the situation your mind goes over alot of options...im glad i chose the right thing...thanks for writing such a strong poem...
     
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    Seems the older I get the more precious I realize that all life is.
    This was powerful, man... Whew...
    One love
     
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    Thankz sista and i'm too happy you made the right choice
    visit pt.1 to this piece sista LovelyG

    true indeed skrybble7 life is worth and beautiful
     
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