Black Poetry : let me know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Mar 30, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wish to know what it is
    that I should say or not say
    were to say it or how
    I wish to know what you want
    can we start again
    can we put aside yesterday
    and look at today and tomorrow
    maybe relearn of each other
    maybe discover love once again
    maybe even be friends as well
    as lovers
    maybe hand in hand take walks
    along the beach
    or watch the sunsets from
    the mountain of gold
    or find new adventures
    or whatever you may wish
    maybe we can rebuild a life
    rebuild a relationship
    and live out our lives together
    I don't know what to say
    I don't know what you want
    or don't want
    so I'm guessing this is it
    I'm hoping this is it
    I wish to know though
    I wish you would let me know

    03/30/03/Michael
     
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    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, my! How touching is this! I hope all works out the way you wish. *sigh

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God's will be done...
    Thanx.
     
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    Oh Darling Scrybe, how exhausting it must be to be you, for I am very much like you in temperament, thoughts, and feelings for the day...Why won't they just say what they want, need or feel? I too am wondering.



    I'm just sayin...
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, my dearest Weaver of Dreams, I assure you
    if things were not so nebulous you wouldn't have
    to ask me twice.
    Thanx.
    Peace to you.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece made me revisit a time in my past.

    communication is the bridge to everywhere.
    (that's just my opinion) :)

    Nice scribe!

    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    ^^^you ain't lying!!^^^

    Sometimes, I think we're too old to be playing guessing games. Just tell what's up. We save so much time that way.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your so right cocobutterskyn, communication is everything.
    God bless ya!



    I couldn't agree more, Blue. When it ain't up front, things have a way of becoming suspect. I just can't see what "good" that does...
    Peace to ya!
     
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    why is it so hard to communicate...

    to translate the timorous tendencies of our mate
    opening up channels
    for one to elaborate
    the nagging notch at the nape
    of your neck
    check
    the rhyme
    then check the technique
    why come you cant speak
    instead sit silently enraged
    in heat
    the crux to our defeat
    explains why our will is so weak
    and confusion is our treat...
     
  10. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok.
    nevermind the binds blinds
    and gags made to lag the mental
    forget the questions of malice
    or what is accidental
    but ain't it simple
    if truth is preferencial
    and essential
    for interrelations
    what's communication without it
    I doubt it ever amounts to much
    without sincere words direct
    like a touch
    there ain't much
    to work with
    to search without eyes
    or without ears to listen
    seems futile and unfruitful
    leaving the mission in suspicion
    of the shtick
    left with breadth of depth of questions
    likes is it truly treat or just more trick?