Quiet Poetry Lounge : Let me Know CAn I

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Versatile, Mar 20, 2005.

  1. Versatile

    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me Know/ Can I

    Come and rescue me
    I am crying out to you my darling
    The pain, the suffering of not hearing from you
    Let me Know
    If you are still breathing the same air that we breathe
    Let me know
    Are you okay, Are you still standing on solid ground
    Let me Know
    Where you are, Who your with
    Are they treating you with the amount of respect you deserve
    Yes sir, Good morning, Good afternoon, Good Night
    Let me know
    If your sleeping tight
    Are there any nightmares provoking your mind
    If so
    Can I get you a warm cup of milk?
    Can i fluff your pillow?
    Can i ease the pain out of your sore working muscles?
    Let me know
    Can i Sing you sweet melodies until you float your way into the deepness of your sleep?
    Let me Know
    Can i Wake you up to breakfast in bed?
    So that you can inhale the intoxicating scent of buttermilk pancakes
    Covered lightly with syrup
    Your scrambled eggs sprinled with just the right amount of salt
    Your toast toasted to right hue of golden brown
    Spread with the best jam or jelly
    Let me Know
    Can i greet you by the front door
    Wearing my skin, covered with the color of your favorite lingerie
    With a dab of your cologne behind my ears
    Approaching you with a sway in my hips
    So that you can flirt with my sexuality
    Knowing what you have but cant get enough of
    Because i wouldn`t wait for a Valentines Day to treat you like this
    Your my man you deserve it
    Let me Know
    Can I masterbate your mind with conversation
    Maybe about politics
    Whats going on around the world
    About me and you and how far we`ve gotten
    Let me know If i can
    Because its what i want.
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful job of describing intense love, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow here.........
     
  4. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wooo weee ..that was hot...that was the :bomb: ..nice nice.. thanks..wooo *fanning self*