Black Poetry : Let Me in Your Space

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  1. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What if now was the time?
    What if this was the place?
    What if we had no previous obligations,
    nor previous commitments to chase?

    What if I we could not think about tomorrow,
    nor any consequence we may face?
    What if I could satisfy your every request
    when you let me in your space?

    What if I apply some “nice and slow”,
    To make certain you are akin to my pace?
    What if your reservations become obscure
    And all of your inhibitions are displaced?

    What if I can feel your tender lips,
    and feel the warmth of your embrace
    What if you show me what brings you delight,
    and I was willing to do whatever it takes

    What if I could assist you in grasping
    the potential fulfillment that awaits?
    What if you were to surrender a moment?
    A moment where there is no need for haste.

    A moment when you unravel you sweetness,
    And you invite me to enjoy a taste.
    We can let the moment escalate naturally,
    Deriving pleasure from what ever it creates.​
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lend me some sugar.. l am your neighbor
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    she'll let you in after this one bruh :toast:

    mos definitely,
    jh.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like what if would be a definite yes, well posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most def .....
    she will hear u after this scribe and
    inward you're be fo real !
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH YES! OH HELLLLLLLLLLLLLL! YES!

    THIS WAS HOT AND DELIGHTFULLY SEDUCTIVE WITH CLASS!

    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poetry!


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  7. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank to everyone for reading and the kind thoughts....
    This piece aided me in achieving what I was shooting for.
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very beautifully written...much love to you.
     
  9. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you true love... I am really feeling the love here, thanks to everone again
     
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