Black Poetry : let me in ya heart

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    for now it's been
    in the windz of love
    tested by time and
    my love of heart opens
    reaching wit a knock
    let me in ya heart
    to love u right
    keep u safe at night
    caress ya thoughts
    whisper sweet things
    in ya ear candle light
    dinner for two
    just me and u
    comfort u in a back rub
    squeeze love & hug u
    give my gentle affection
    guide ya romantic direction
    take u in extreme bliss
    and master u wit dis long
    tongue twist
    rock u in the rapture of love
    sho u loyal and hold u
    like a glove
    let me in ya heart
    this where our souls start
    let me in today
    and tonight we play in the
    musical mystery of my bliss
    let me take u deep into this
    twisted notion of waves
    let me roll u in da desires
    of destiny and feasta ya
    body to a moaning crave
    and the erotic bath of two
    hot oils and bubbles ova u
    let me splash in ya warmth
    as our heart tangle freely
    souls float on da wingz
    as we take flyte to my domain
    let me in ya heart ! :deal: :spin: :huh:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to open my heart
    would be right
    my thoughts caress
    from the compfort
    of you
    your lips softly touch
    my ear lodes and hum
    a sweet tune
    that melts me
    and mold me there in your arms
    i fix tight
    like a glove
    feeling your hands caress
    the small of my back
    i step closer
    closer
    the squeeze of your love
    the gentle affection
    of this romantic eve
    is the destiny
    of a dream
    as we feast
    on the wave
    of this romantic moment
    of pleasure together

    (feeling yur flow)

    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :spinstar: Take me
    Come in my heart
    My world
    Caress my thoughts
    And jus……
    Come my king
    The gentle affection
    The sweet embrace
    of this what you offer
    how can I refuse
    within itself
    souls float on
    da wingz
    of love….come within
    my heart
    love the vibe of this one
    taste sweetness
    yearn the words
    and just flow…love it
    can I have more…… :angel1:
     
  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You knock at
    the door of my
    heart and I feel
    I should answer
    for you bring with
    you such passion
    and sensuality
    and I seem to
    crave these things.
    I want your security
    and I long for all
    that your body can
    give me
    so If I open
    my heart
    promise to
    be gentle.
    I am afraid I
    will fall in love.

    Hey there Mr.$$R$$ I couldn't help
    but respond. You brought that out of me. :wink:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your heart is calling out so sweetly in this verse, it's hard not to want to answer the call with a flow of one's own. Lovingly posed, Rich. And such warm responses ladies.
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maaaaan!!

    Everybody tryin to get their floE on in here...
    Very nice
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Bluewater..............
    sweet release of lovin
    as we mend heart inside
    the bliss of rapture and
    feel da warmth of our souls
    clashing in bond if u allow
    me in ya heart by faith
    as i caress u to a captivity
    of sweet hush and make u
    feel the comforting of love
    let me in ya heart !!


    blkAngel......................
    sweet yearns
    da burns within
    is the bliss of thy heart
    my loveth of rapture
    capture u in da moment
    of reasons as we lay
    in our own hush mixin
    bodies clashing souls
    yes da passion doors
    open to erotic desires
    if u only let me in ya heart !!!

    thatgirl74...................
    compassionate love
    of thy heart forth is
    gentle as it caress u
    tenderly protect u
    physically as we embrace
    in the warmth of lovin
    open ya heart to a bliss
    of comfort and know my love
    be not afraid of thy heart
    as it confess loyality
    will u let me in ya heart
    i mend da broken
    bring smile to ya face
    caress ya mental
    and leave a lovin trace
    allow me in ya secret place

    watz...................
    yes the warmth of heart in a splash
    releasing a rapture if u only let me in ya heart

    Nita .............
    getting a bliss da feeling of twist
    flowing in rapture right here so let ya
    pen flow and float on the wingz of love
    from da man above release womannnnnnnn!
    and allow me in ya heart !

    Thankz all for the warmth da flowz and love shared on this , most humbled
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang..rich...i love reading..u, your peotry has such a warmth about it....this was a masterpeice...
    :heart:
    -story
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz lil sistah u bring it sweet to my ears as well
    i love ya flava u know i'm ya fan ! too big thankz
     
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    hot scribes
    brotha rich
    and all mi sistas
     
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