Black Poetry : Let me hold you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Nov 18, 2005.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gregarious in nature
    Strong and with a nice smile
    Laugh with me
    Talk with me
    Lets walk and do that a while

    Is it ok if I touch you here?
    Hold your hand sometimes
    Soft touches on your arm at night
    Is how I relate my mind?

    It says how much I love you
    It tells me all about you
    That if I can touch
    And hold you much
    You feel you can hold
    Me too.

    I see your one with nature
    It shows your spiritual heart
    Understanding of man
    God’s master plan
    To join two loving hearts

    Did you say that you like music?
    What kind?
    I like that kind myself.
    Jazz is a blast, it’s awesome past
    Brings new horizons wrapped in blue

    Come here its raining outside
    It’s coming down real hard
    You’re waiting for me to come out there?
    Another romantic atmosphere, my heart
    Your amazing girl
    You rock my world
    I like it as I take your hand
    Recall I asked
    You to let me show that
    I am a virtuous man.



     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWW, Hodee!!
    I love this.
    Hey, I'll let u hold me.
     
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    Hi Brotha HODEE
    Oh so romantic
    :) so smooth
    This drop is just taking my heart
    whoosh..Yeah HODEE
    Keep bringing it...smooth operator


    Peace
     
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    Yes this certainly was sweet and romantic. Your pen is on a roll brotha.
     
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    this was so sweeeeeeeeeet. flow on my brotha.:flowers:
     
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    Gotta fifth it. This was sweetly spoken. I especially like the the rain scence in the end. Keep doing it up!
     
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    i hear ya, is it safe to take 80, and junction to 580,

    smobbin' round the Bay, you prolly passed this Lady,

    with all that cool weather, my body heat you will feel,

    so you're a virtuous MAN, i dig, i can deal,

    your presence so close, to your Manhood i make a toast,

    it's the way you're so discreet, that I'm diggin tha most,

    80's soft rock, and R&B puts me in tha mood,

    lemme know somethin' bout you, what's your favorite food?,

    curiosity gettin' tha best of me,

    your poetry is soooo testin me,

    a trip to Pier 39 this weekend,

    happens to be my destiny

    To Be Continued......................


    :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :spinstar: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:
     
  8. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow SpicyBrown you make a brother smile. :sand: Those things you wrote I know every turn and place you mention.
     
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    Hodee:

    "Wow SpicyBrown you make a brother smile. Those things you wrote I know every turn and place you mention."





    You had me blushin' how I made you flash those pearly whites,

    See babe, it's my pleasure, just keep serenading me right,

    So you familiar with the piers, the Fisherman's Wharf, and Market street?,

    the only thing i don't like is all that walking: the agony of da-feet,

    Lets take the cable car from downtown, and up through the hills,

    don't worry i ain't after your money, this time we'll go Dutch on the bill,

    A cruise 'round the Bay on the ferry,

    Babe, that would be merry,

    cuddling next to you, smelling as fresh as baby powder,

    let's get out the cold, and enjoy a breaded bowl of Clam Chowder,

    looking into your eyes as the wind makes my hair slap my face,

    scanning down to those luscious lips, wondering how they taste,

    Before the night ends, lets briefly cruise through the ghettoes,

    Fillmore, Hunters Point, the Loins, aint the same no mo',

    It's the 11th hour, and this rendez-vous was just fab,

    open up your trench coat, warm me with one last grab,

    gently kiss me on my forehead, and wish me a good night,

    watching you in my rear view, until you're no longer in sight,

    Till next time sweetie, i'll definately reminisce on this,

    I'm so infatuated, so God is my witness.

    To Be Continued...........


    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :wine: :smooch: :wine: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  10. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So you familiar with the piers, the
    Fisherman's Wharf, and Market Street?

    Oh yes I been there many times,
    But this is what we gonna do.

    Travel around the wharf in
    a white horse drawn carriage,
    all decorated even the horse is looking his best.

    Then we leave the carriage and
    take the cable car.

    Cause your desire is what I long to fulfill.
    You’re my drive, my waken hour,
    my hearts will to live, my only desire.

    Baby I don’t place money in no special high regard.
    Choosing to make you happy is not something I find real hard.

    A cruise 'round the Bay on the ferry, now this sounds nice.
    In the carriage I packed a basket of wine, ********, cheese
    and some spicy sliced meats.

    I called a friend who has a boat docked in San Mateo Bay.
    I charted us a day on Angel Island sweet.
    I know vistas, and some corners
    on that place we can escape.

    Grab that blanket to cover the ground.
    Scanning down to those luscious lips,
    wondering how they taste.

    I can no longer wait.
    So I place you on that blanket
    as we finish our Orange Muscat wine
    and I spank it.

    Looking into your eyes as the wind makes your hair slap your face.
    You say to me...

    Babe, this is nice cuddling next to you,
    smelling as fresh as baby powder,
    let's get out the cold,
    and enjoy a breaded bowl of Clam Chowder.

    Alright sweet I agree.
    Were done on Angel Island.
    But I want to say you made this place very special to me.
    I won’t ever forget spending it here with you.

    It’s early still.
    I stay up all night.
    Lets skip the city.
    No it’s not a done night.

    I’ll drive but doing this Limo style all the way is just a phone call.
    High on you baby hold my hand and take this flight.

    I may run like this for the next 36
    almost a forty hour week, drunk on this.

    I like to gamble play the slots a bit.
    Come lets head for the casinos so the bay we split.
    I’m gonna check with you first but I have to ask...
    Can you call in sick cause we aren’t rushing back?
     
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