Black Poetry : Let Me Go!!!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetic Pride, Aug 6, 2004.

  1. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let me go...
    I want to go free.
    I'm tired of the animosity
    that stems from petty picks..
    pick, pick, picking at unintentional
    flying darts.
    I didn't mean to aim for your heart,
    but you should've been truthful
    from the start
    instead of playing First Impressions:
    A game that will sooner or later end.
    See, I just dived into the relationship
    being genuine.
    So, whatever words FLOW---
    emphasis please 'cause I don't slip...
    I mean what I say and say what I mean---
    so, whatever words flow
    from my mouthpiece should instantly be forgiven
    for not giving me prior warning of your pet peeves.
    You startled me and caught me off guard when you
    replied to my unintentional darting phrases with,
    "Kiss my ***!"
    So, let this spoken word be my reply:
    How about I put my converse up yo ***,
    then maybe you'll converse with me at ease..
    you tell me your pet peeves and I give you an apology,
    "cause honestlydidn't know 'em"
    but naw, make it the last time using the devil's language
    on me 'cause next time I'll give you no warning.
    I'll just scold you into righteousness, giving you no other
    choice but to convert as I set fire to your jewels.
    Let that **** burn...3 inches ain't nothing to miss!
    No more calling females in the midnight hour to
    accompany their loneliness
    cause I speak for every woman when I say
    the tongue may stimulate,
    but the swipe is what makes you percolate.
    If I was to set my standards leaning towards
    sexual preferences yo 6'7 in height divided by two
    would have long ago been dismissed!
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well now, I'd say that you've already let go. This was a direct hit...ouch!!!! Flow on, release.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep scribing u let it all go on dis !
     
  4. Poetic Pride

    Poetic Pride Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx

    Thanks ya'll...I love this piece because it helped me to let go..cause I was still holding on..not to 3 inches though! Just holding onto the relationship...I had that can't-get-rid-of-the-jackass-boyfriend-SYNDROME.