Black Poetry : Let Me Comfort You

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  1. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lay here beside me, love
    And bless me with your
    Closeness
    Tell me about all of your
    Hopes and dreams
    Shower me with your
    Wisdom
    Embrace me with your
    Passions
    Let me hear your whispers
    Of love felt so deep
    Let me hear your heart
    Beat
    Let me be the sky that
    Awaits your presence
    Let me be the sun that
    Awaits your smile
    Let me be the clouds
    That are so breathless
    Let me be the wind that
    Brings you serenity from
    Within
    Let me lay here beside
    You, love...
    Let me be the comfort that
    You need
    Kissing your eye-lids as
    You drift off into me
    Holding you here in my
    Arms as we meditate on
    Life's many complexities
    Feeling the warmth of
    Your feathered soft skin
    Let me live in your heart
    And die in your eyes as
    You let me comfort you


    ~~~listeristrulyscribin'foryou~~~

    kaslis, copyright 2000 all rights reserved.
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Let me" tell you...

    That this is beautiful...

    There is nothing more delicate than love spoken
    in poetry

    *feathers*
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LISTER.....

    OH... BUT YESSSS!!

    i can breathe again!... thank you dear dear friend for
    gracing the pages with your pure poetic presense....

    you know a sistah needed dis ryght hea!! it was oh-so
    beautifully tyght... but you knew that already... ryght?! :)

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hunter, now, you know that you are right....love poetry. i thank you for the read. smiles to you, dear poetess.

    sweet sunshyne, only because you told me so, ma dear friend. i thank you for the read, as well.

    :heart: :heart: :heart:
    ~puttinmaheartinit~
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    List~

    And with your heart-in-it.......it sure reads BeaUtifully!

    I definitely love this scribe poetess!
    Thank you for this today!

    Your sista friend sees the SoulurN2!
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    entering from the garden of serenity

    ahhh, tis sweet the words of the priestess of love. i enjoy your words a they dance fom the page into the hearts of men who could not possibly love you in such a way unless they embraced you through your pen....

    beautiful my friend... :toast:

    returning to the garden...
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooh lister, my sister....

    this peace is soooo soothing! soooo

    wrap-him-up-inside-the-LUV TIGHT!!!!!!

    vibin on ya gurl!

    thank you

    a
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    such a relaxing ~ soft ~ beautiful ~ peace

    do that thang gurlie ~ hehehehe ~

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Let me live in your heart
    And die in your eyes"

    Now that right there is what did it for me !!!!!!!!!!
    I stand in awe
    and bow deeply :eek:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    JUMPIN' FROM FLIGHT UPON YA
    PURE SHEER BEAUTY OF WELL
    WRITTEN PASSION OF LOVE
    CARESSES AND GENTLE TOUCHIES
    I FEEL U NEAR ME
    NOW LETS EMBRACE UNDER THE CHERRY MOON:love: :heart:
     
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