Quiet Poetry Lounge : LET ME BE !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Oct 20, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Let me be the morning
    ya eyez see at first light
    the face u wake up to

    Let me be the soulful hum
    inside your glorious world
    within life we may share

    Let me be the tickling whispers
    of possibility in your ear
    and the name within ya heart

    Let me be the day
    that rejoices in all your bright
    black beauty

    Let me be the slant of light
    that reveals your exquisite grace
    upon the glist of your night

    Let me be da everlasting space
    we share unconditionally
    between sadness and happiness
    against right and wrong

    Let me the bridge which u walk
    da heart u can rest upon
    and the soul to blanket you

    Let me dance in the radiant of
    your summer soul essence
    at your feet i bow in honor of u

    tis heart not a field of play
    but one to embrace if allowed
    let me be da soft kiss on ya lips

    O' ye my beloveth forth art we
    at the temps of our love that
    i am of you dat my love spool
    deeper in da depth of your love

    LET ME BE !


    :hearts1::hearts1::hearts1::hearts1:
     
  2. mizjoice

    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That is simply, and purely, beautiful Rich!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agreeing with mizjoice, this flowed like whispers of sweet joy, how beautiful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u my beloved sisters .....i guess when the heart speaks beautiful thing flow