Black Poetry : Let it of been me...(smh)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Sep 5, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im not mad that she kissed you
    cuz takin my place will never be the issue
    Im not mad that subconsciously u dissed me
    cuz I know that u only did it cuz u miss me
    I know that when she did it u wanted it to be me
    I cant hate tha game of the playa cuz tha playa got it from me
    I dont know how far yall took it... naked... or just topless...
    But Im pretty sure you'd scream my name in the proccess
    Im not mad that she got close enough to touch you
    cuz 4 weeks ago u were lookin me in the eye sayin "i love u"
    Im not trippin that u lied to me
    cuz I know when ur upset u'll call me up n cry to me
    Im not vexed that u've been out all night creepin real low
    cuz eventually u'll want my love to be ur pillow
    Im not bent over someone else pickin up ur phone
    cuz one day u'll dial me up n i wont be alone
    Im not mad that my face didnt make u stop n see
    it was wrong, all Im sayin is.. let it of been me...
     
  2. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u got me glad that I ain't that ex-man of yours because he has been officially dismissed :court: :court: :court:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's a calm attitude to be takin, girl. Like this flow, and so good to see you on the page again. Much love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwwwww !!!
    happy i'm not in them shoes of his
    tyte drop
     
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    Shoot, I need to mail this to my ex! Wonderful emotion!
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U go ahead Girl!!! U did ur thing keep doin that [email protected] thing ma and u got my support!!! :read:
     
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    And he shall rue that day, or should I say night of foolish bliss. This was heated, I felt the emotions all up in this, there was fire behind the gentleness of this vibe. This was well written poet.
     
  8. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: ...whoa

    now this was some
    strong medicine...
    Girl...you blazed
    this flow onto
    the page...

    There is still smoke rising...

    Tyte...
    Sage
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dang ma, this was tyte. I was truly feeling this. Let it of been me, tyte title too. Much props for this ma.
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte girl...:)
     
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