Black Poetry : Let It Flow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Apr 4, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I’ll wait… however long it takes
    for you to finally realize that
    you should be mine
    that i should be yours
    that you & me… should be WE
    will be an US… it’s definitely a must
    it’s without a doubt inevitable
    a total certainty… the fates
    have declared you should be with me
    i know you agree—
    i can tell by the way you treat me
    it’s there when you speak to me
    ………...touch me
    …………………..look at me
    ……………………………..love me
    I’ll wait… ‘til you no longer want to fight it
    ‘til you let down your guard & realize that
    you don’t have to protect your heart
    you see… the fact that a couple we’ll be
    wasn’t decided by me it was written
    in the stars… our union is heavenly
    i made a list of what i wanted
    & sent it up as a prayer
    Spirit sent You back—
    & now you’re standing here…
    in all of your masculine beauty
    struggling internally…
    to hold yourself away from me
    afraid (because of past experiences)
    to admit the obvious & embrace the evident
    this time it won’t work
    so just set it free… let US be
    just let go… let the love flow…
    i promise you’ll see…
    WE are infinitely meant to be
    poet you… poetess me—
    intertwining majestically
    to create the ultimate masterpiece…
    ……i know you feel me
    ………………i know you can relate
    ………………………..….....so meditate—
    I’ll wait.


    © SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if this is another attempt at:
    "who shot John", i aint playin.. spent my life savings tryin to guess on the other one. You do know they started charging for that other thread.... right? LOL!!!

    kidding....really though..

    That was beautiful sis... Im sure he'll come around. Until then, I know quite a few poets around here who would want the opportunity....
    Cant say i don't understand why Ms. Sunshyne....
    Much love...

    8th!
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah this is...

    shyning like that most def!!! Never stop it - just let it flow!!!!

    I'm feelin' this piece like I'm feelin' ya too!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  4. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well GA...you know...you got skilzzzzzzzzzzzzzz! and I just wanted to add your vibe in scribe is tight! and.........this piece of you is like WOW!

    one love, blak
     
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    That's My Sistah!!!

    Now, you done gone and done it again. *Baskin' in the shyne*, you keepin' it thorough, ma...
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    I love this part, "so just set it free… let US be just let go… let the love flow" Ain't that the truth. Just go with the flow. Nice job.
    One_Love
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WE are infinitely meant to be
    poet you… poetess me—
    intertwining majestically
    to create the ultimate masterpiece…
    ……i know you feel me
    ………………i know you can relate
    ………………………..….....so meditate—
    I’ll wait.


    Sunny with a heart like yours gyrl you shouldn't have to, but I feel you on that. Get the right one that deserves you.

    One
     
  8. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ***sitting on the tribal cousel on survivor***

    well i lost this week's immunity challenge so i got voted off the island but i'm wonderin' whom this person may be that got's you scribin' so intensely. i'm only asking so that i won't vote them off next. ***looking around for allies***

    so many scribes but the secrets safe with you.

    :hot: piece poetess, but what would i expect from the rays of GA sun? :shades:
     
  9. thepoetsean

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    it could be your luminescence holdin' him back!!!

    GA_sun...

    shynin' on that man--
    he is blessed--
    having an entity like u--
    "sendin' up a prayer for him"

    GOOD LUCK...

    (and get him sum shades...the UV from u is killa!!!)
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel da love in dis room...

    8TH & D...
    i thought it only fitting to respond to you guys at
    the same time... since i see you have the same idea!
    this is not a "who shot john" or a mystery which
    would cause anyone to be voted off the island... :lol:
    as a matter of fact this is an Old piece... but it
    does bring to mind New feelings... :wink:

    GQ... VERB... MAPLE... ONE_LOVE...
    thanks for the love... glad you feel my rayz... :)
    glad you think i'm like wow... cause i feel the same
    way about you... keep baskin in the shyne... & thanks
    for the read!!! :)

    ZORBSHUN...
    you are soooo sweet sis!! but i really mean it
    when i say "I'll Wait"... i mean hey!... nothing
    happens before its time... & some things are just
    worth waiting for... feel me??? :)

    TPSEAN
    thank you for gracing me with your presence once
    again... my "numba one fan"... :) do you think i'm
    shynin' to brilliant & bryght for him sean?? nawww..
    dat ain't the case in this hea case... (lol)
    thanks for the read!!! & you need to be prayin'
    for ME!!!

    WHEW!! I'll neva wait this long again to respond
    to you guys!!! It's All Love...:heart:
     
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