Black Poetry : LET IT FLOW

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by malikai, Mar 17, 2001.

  1. malikai

    malikai New Member MEMBER

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    Let it flow is what I always say
    this is the philosophy I live by day to day
    the drama of life is enough to drive you insane
    but i won't let the parasites take over my brain
    life is full of struggles
    you don't have to tell me twice
    i've had enough conflict in my life
    no dad growing up
    i know he doesn't care
    he's not dead, he's alive
    but he just wasn't there
    peace of mind is hard to find when happiness and pain intertwine
    but i seem to deal with it all to well
    this is a dramatic story that i have to tell
    feeling unwanted by the one man you look up to
    a kid without a role model
    what can I do
    see these feelings i have are hard to let go
    but life is a heartbreaker so just let it flow
     
  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Malikia, hold your head up high,
    because I love you, and I refuse to let
    you carry this pain alone,and anytime you
    feel like floe'n..we welcome it here...so that
    we can laugh or cry 2gether....
    Remember you have love here 4 Malikia ......> :heart:
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it flow... indeed.

    we cannot change the past...
    therefore we have to make
    the best of the present &
    the future... just remember...
    in all things & at all times
    Keep Your Head Up

    this was truly heart-felt!

    Peace&Blessings...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Malikai ~ Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    Such a beautiful and heartfelt flow
    you've chosen to share with us
    loved it ... still loving it

    Thank You

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Malikai,

    Diggin' ya flow fella!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  6. malikai

    malikai New Member MEMBER

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    Thanx to all of the above for giving me props on my scribe.
    I appreciate it because it's my first on this site. Thanx again.


    Love N Peace 2 All
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So true So true
    Man you read my mind
    Much Love poet
    Nice Piece
     
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