Black Poetry : Let it be Known

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nfinite, Apr 20, 2005.

  1. nfinite

    nfinite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The world left him underhanded
    to rise himself to be the man
    and always took for granted
    thinking he
    would never need to grow
    never need to show
    responsiblity
    cuz he
    lacked the sensibility
    see he
    never seen any reason to stand up and be a man
    though he claimed to be a man
    an in depth contradiction
    mind you he couldn't understand
    that a man isn't measured
    by his jewel and his treasures
    by his needs or his pleasures
    but his actions
    let it be known.
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WORD!

    write on... tell'em so they'll know!

    Great write!




    poetrysouldeep!
    Coco :)
     
  3. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re: Known

    Excellent!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, when it comes down to it, a man is judged by what he does. Your words hit the target poet. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say it loud and clear so one may know
    tyte drop
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WORD UP KID!...tell em!!!

    yo this was hottt....like the message...
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well I think you sumed it up quite well...
    And actions speaks louder than words
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ain't that the truth. Tight write.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with all the tightness
    that is used to define poetry
    and then some
    but
    way beyond "cliche"
    this was the real stuff...

    I loved it poet!
    Sage
     
  10. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nfinite,
    I :bowdown: to this one and I have never done this to any scrybe.
    This is the truth... I loved every word.
    and last but not least: a good observation, well expressed!!!

    Looking forward for more...

    :heart: moham
     
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