Black Poetry : Let Go

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, May 10, 2003.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can u smell the pungent aroma of marijuana.......

    Smoke fills the room, but
    nothing could cloud this view
    I sit here alone, as my mind torches me
    Painting beautiful pictures of you
    I put my heart in my pocket and
    Bore all emotions when
    I rolled down my sleeves
    I sat teary eyed begging you to stay
    but Instead you chose to leave
    Love
    I just don’t understand it I
    opened up my arms and you
    wrestled sanity from me
    Slowly my mind drifts and
    a lil more consciousness slips with
    Every breath I breathe
    Maybe latter I’ll let go
    But for right now I’ll grieve
    irational thoughts now conceived
    Birthed from broken promises and
    these Now reoccurring dreams
    All a little different but with the
    exact same theme, I’m taken from
    Hope to hopelessness
    Saintly to man of sin
    But this cannot be the peak
    B/c I refuse to descend
    I’m trying to fight this,
    trying to somehow get threw
    I swear to god I don’t want to but
    I can’t stop loving you…………
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt ...............deep here
    this speak out loud & clear
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem poet well written and well understood nice flow peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks u2
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice l. I felt that right here :heart: Im feelinit and one day, I hope that pain goes away
     
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    Awwwww! Sweet.
     
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    tyte *** poem.........much love :)
    I swear to god I don’t want to but
    I can’t stop loving you…………(i dayum sure can relate to that :) )