Quiet Poetry Lounge : Let Freedom Sound

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by flojo, Jun 15, 2004.

  1. flojo

    flojo Active Member MEMBER

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    Let freedom sound
    throughout my heavy ladened soul
    Drowning in the
    salty taste of sorrows' tears
    Who can be trusted in this
    world of malice?
    Noone, no, not one
    Kissing and carressing the knife
    in my back
    While deceit thrusts
    himself inside of me
    Come, follow me
    he whispers as demons rape
    pure minds, leaving suspicion behind

    Let freedom sound
    throughout my jaded soul
    Send refuge from the unseen enemy
    that lurks from behind my very eyes
    Vain ignorance clothes with envy
    which in turn strangles with a cord of
    indulgence
    Drink your drink of relvery
    Your cup of addiction runneth over
    Betrayal hides behind the smile of
    an angel
    Peace hides in the shadows of fear
    And the little child
    screams for all the world to hear
    Let freedom sound!
    Let freedom sound!
    Let freedom sound!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flojo through this scribe i hear the voices scream freedom !
    tyte drop wow!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *APPLAUSE & WHISTLES*

    Could this piece be any more powerful, thought provoking and inspirational...

    You captured it so perfectly...

    Wonderful Peace!
     
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    And although evil lurks in the most innocent places, freedom will ring none the less. And the positive is what ended up resounding here, come what may.
     
  5. mickey

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    AH THE SWEET SOUNDS OF FREEDOM THAT SOME SAY ARE RINGING BECAUSE WE LIVE IN THE HOME OF THE FREE AND THE BRAVE...AMERIKKKA...
    I FELT YOU ON THIS ONE
    ONE LOVE
     
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