Khasm13 : let da rain cum down...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    let da rain cum down
    as transparent water droplets surround
    me standing here alone
    with a phat frown
    all ova town
    it's raining
    leaving me to feel da pain and
    the feeling of loss
    did i once think i was the boss
    i don't know, i don't remember
    i do remember beginning ta
    feel olda den betsie ross
    da cost of lovin you
    has left me blu
    can i start anew?
    it's raining harder and harder
    as i step thru
    reflections of you in puddles
    my mind is befuddled
    i watch people huddle
    under walkways
    it's fiece out there nowdays
    i feel like my heart is set ablaze
    walking in dis watery maze
    my mind in a purple haze
    i tried to act like i'm not fazed
    but with each cloud tear
    i remember each sad page
    a true tragedy
    that has left me felling empty
    so
    let da rain cum down
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm13

    Let it rain,
    Your loss is our gain
    When it pours like this!
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling the sentiment here...truly......this flow is deep.
    Yes, let the rains come......(loved the imagery of being caught in the rain)

    Much luv,
    Angeli
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i like this alot...
     
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    much love to ya....dis was str8 awesome and flow wit
    reality
     
  6. Alizentang

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    This was another piece of the Khasm art gallery. Felt like getting my umbrella.
     
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    Ok is it my nasty mind or what?

    It took me a minute to realize that my mind had gone in the wrong direction, but when I got to the meat of the message, I was as always "pleasantly surprised" and before the last line was read I had a teardrop in my eye...sliding down my cheek and finding refuge on my breast, the words came to rest in my heart ...
    Beautiful imagery , from a "Beautiful MIND". As always I enjoyed it immensley.

    Blessings On Ya House!:kiss:
     
  8. PurpleMoons

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    I'M FEELING THIS PIECE! AFTER THE RAIN A RAINBOW EMERGES!
    MAY YOU FIND YOUR RAINBOW! Heartfelt piece!
     
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    :sigh: I have been hit again with A Poet's Piece...Left a slight dent on it's way to my Heart Khas......I was really feelin it
     
  10. Khasm13

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    no protection from me getting pelted
    i felt it
    in da past maybe i was da one that delt it
    somber feelings on dis dreary day
    and i can't help it
    zeus drops lightning on my mind
    reminding me of all those good times
    while takin out da bad
    i know it was plenty bad
    but i can't remember
    isn't that sad
    truely sad
    that i'm thinking bout what i used to have
    as water floods da perimeter
    i look at people shady like a senator
    thinkin that i'm seein water demons
    schemin on da unbroken piece of my heart
    which makes me hesitant to start to
    step out of da rain
    and to begin anew
    into skies yellow white and baby blue
     
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