Black Poetry : LET’S MAKE LOVE TO A LOVE SONG

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LET’S MAKE LOVE TO A LOVE SONG

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    In a language that’s understood by those in Portugal and Hong Kong
    And in Africa and in Asia – in places far and wide
    Making love to a melody as our minds, bodies and souls coincide
    Let’s join in the coital coupling that a man and a woman were made for
    The likes of which has me satisfied and laid sore
    Touching each other in particular regions, nether
    Engaging in a statement of purpose that transcends language altogether
    Let me enjoy your body as you enjoy mine
    As we partake of guilty pleasures like fruit from a forbidden vine
    And make mischief of sorts as you squirm and wiggle
    And during our times of intermission I say something to make you giggle
    Let’s do things that are sexually amusing
    Things that will cause you to say my name in the language of your choosing
    As we coil like fighting serpents, twisting from right to left
    Punctuating the experience with your orgasm, and the catching of my breath

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    With the back drop to suggestive lyrics in a place where we belong
    Making music of our own – our bodies writing out a narrative
    Putting our inhibitions aside, giving in to a primal biological imperative
    Safe from the peering of the outside and the ordinary
    Away from the nay sayings of any adversary
    Who would speak of me and you in the context of the contrary
    Us, in our place of solitude that we’ve ordained our sanctuary
    With surroundings that afford us the freedom to bare all, with no shame
    Present with an honest nakedness, wearing nothing but our names
    With your legs wrapped around me in an embrace I can’t get enough of
    As I hold you and do as the song says … and that’s to make love
    In our own private universe that consist of walls and a ceiling
    Doing naughty things that- in future times – will be for our own revealing
    With a feeling, ecstatic and beyond verbal description
    Pleasuring each other to a lovers groove, as lovers move and make friction

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    Let’s take Friday off and spend time together, and I mean all weekend long
    Doing that which comes naturally with nothing done by force
    As one thing leads to another, and nature takes its course
    Taking our time in each others presence because time is on our side
    Doing the things that grown folks do … behind closed doors we hide
    And if the walls could talk they’d tell of things done in certain places
    That would cause the color of ‘blush’ to adorn both of our faces
    As the love sang says kiss, let’s kiss with an obsessive passion
    As the love song suggest embrace, we do so in like fashion
    As the love song speaks of taste, you taste mine and I tasted yours
    During our weekend rendezvous let’s abandon our inhibitions and our mores
    For 72 hours let’s hold each other and cuddle
    Let’s bump, grind, **** to orgasm, and make a puddle
    Let’s perspire and sweat – scream like the animals in the African bush
    Let’s intermix physics and sex … let’s pull and push

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    And do all the right things that undoes all the wrong
    Consummating our togetherness with a coital engagement
    Gathering in a sensual congress that ends our separation and estrangement
    As the voice in the song says “Let’s make love tonight”
    Along with suggesting sounds and sexual overtones that makes the mood just right
    With the atmosphere charged with music an sexual tension
    And although anxiety levels are high, not so with the apprehension
    With the sounds of sex in the foreground with a melodic backdrop
    We commence to stir up a rhythm that just won’t stop
    Not until your love comes down, stirred by our man-woman motion
    Dancing – joined at the pelvis – riding you like the tides of the ocean
    Our hip movements are powerful, just short of touching the spiritual
    Our worship is anointed with pre-orgasmic wetness as we write scriptural -
    References, scrawled in the wrinkles of the bed sheets as a sign
    That our intent is to pleasure one another, as we erotically consume each other and dine

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    Lets get together and do more than just get along
    As I engage you in cunnilingual activities, divine
    And you treat me to fellatial pleasures as we’re postured in position sixty-nine
    As I lick lean labial loveliness from mid-night to new-dawn
    You give me more of your ***** to lick, nibble and chew on
    Feeling the writhing pleasure in your body as I apply a salivial wax
    As the muscles in your *** and lower back tense up and relax
    Holding your hips with both hands as you sensually whimper and quivel
    Limiting your range of motion so only on my face you grind and swivel
    Dancing on my chin as I kiss the private places of your womb
    And as you get closer to orgasm you give me more of your ***** to consume
    I feel bouts of quivering in your rhythm as your hips give chase
    As you’re getting more excited you transition to ******* my face
    Until you release your lady lavender and shudder to utter bliss
    Giving an entirely new meaning to a ‘wet juicy kiss’

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    With the energy of excited people, and hip movements strong
    Making the objective of repeated orgasm and ejaculation a must
    Holding your body tight as you grapple for the bed sheets, moving you with solid thrusts
    With basic body mechanics applied to certain pleasure spots
    Moving along with the simplicity of a child connecting the dots
    Generating body heat … causing the room to get hot
    As I slide my rod of flesh in and out of your twat
    Lets indulge in guilty pleasures, and as such, not abuse it
    Let’s do more than just make love … let’s **** to music
    With a mix of melody … rhythm and rhyme
    We have sex to a beat – moving ourselves to tempo and time
    With metronomic predictability and anticipated irregularities
    We ****, to ease away sexual tension and conjugal disparities
    Giving in to lyrical suggestion and erotic innuendo
    Yielding to the flesh, to the point of climax and salacious crescendo

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    And surrender to ecstatic currents and an insurgent throng -
    Of passion, ecstasy, desire, lust and erotic speak
    Combining physical action and obscene dialogue, making our experience unique
    Moving in and out of you like the slider of a trombone
    As you respond to my movements, with movement and tone
    Piercing my back with your fingernails and uttering moans
    With eyes and mouth wide open, with your release no longer to postpone
    “GET THIS ******* ***** BABY!” IS WHAT YOU SAY, IN EXCLAIM
    There are no if, and, or maybe’s to dispute that you came
    “**** ME **** IT! OH S***!” … your body twitches with flair
    As you wet us both, like a nervous girl wets her underwear
    So turned on by your orgasm, I’m this close to ejaculation
    With no doubt in my mind, supposition or speculation
    We excitedly exchange fluids in heightened moments past due
    ******* to the point where you ‘nut on me, and I ‘nut inside of you

    Let’s make love to a love song …
    So that afterwards we can be as relaxed as a summers eves calm
    After having spent ourselves to unparalleled euphoric plateaus
    And after having tasted of your highs … and your lows
    Spanning the spectrum of intercourse to which our bodies ran amuck
    Giving each other an oratorical discourse with a lick, a slurp and a suck
    Contorting ourselves to bend and tuck
    Moving from moments of tender love making to an all out ****
    Accompanied by music, by which the mood was set
    With a perfect mix of ‘come and get it’ and moments of ‘no no … not yet’
    Playing with and pleasuring each other to no extent or end
    Moments with you that I’d neither recant nor rescind
    Let’s recline together in our nakedness and relax in an embrace
    As I run my fingers through your scalp with a slow, measured pace
    Keeping this rendezvous in memory as sure as the millennium is long
    Ad when the time presents itself again, let’s make love to a love song

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2008
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This the kinda heat needed GS ready to make songs from love
    man u spit this just right now they will come running fo sho!!!

    that uncut version is red heat !
     
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    my man, my man....I enjoyed the hell outta this.....mmmm felt sooo good...
     
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    :read:
    Im almost too innocent for this piece :read: almost lol
    But voraciously written indeed
    way to go poet :read:
     
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    And da beat goes on for this classic hot joint as it return
     
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    Yeah, this def needs an "adults only" label!

    This wasn't no "Let's Get It On" type of vibe.

    This was like some Prince "So And Wet" and some "CREAM!" lol
     
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    tyte poem...runnin water for a cold shower. talk about red alert.lol
     
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    WOWWWWWWWW!!!
    Now that was tyte. I loved it.
    Flow on. Flow on.
     
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    Ey yooo.

    I didn't know garlicsalt was k-jio. Ey, ey ey... I been feelin you for some months hardcore! Found you by "chance" on cocoa lounge and I been smitten with it ever since, my brother.

    For real, you ill and this was just too nice.

    One,

    - Ikoro
     
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    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You never know whose watching ... I'm glad those watching me like what I do :) Ikoro, thanx for showin' the love :)
     
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