Black Haiku : Lessons in Anatomy

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  1. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Teach me by your glowing hair, the glory of your crown.
    Teach me by your piercing eye, the searching of my soul.
    With your breasts a-firm, teach me the nurture of suckling.
    Broad shoulders, balance, strong, essence of strength
    with these teach lessons of endurance.
    The navel, sweet navel, mid-drift accented,
    teaches me to connect, to give life.
    Your vagina, treasured, treasure box
    teaches me delicacies of pleasure.
    With thighs robust, calves quite firm
    and feet so firmly planted
    teach me, my dear, what it is to stand
    when life’s favor is not granted.
     
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    maybe this one was too heavy for em - what do you think?

    1luv
    2fish
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not the usual flow - but i hope they can feel it.
     
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    not the usual flow... but done jjjjuuust right.
    short... but full of meaning. it's true when
    you think about it... the female anatomy...
    holds the secrets to life. i can dig it, poet!! :)

    itsallLove.

    elayne.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woman is THE MOST beautiful of God's creations. that's what blew adams mind in the garden. - it was that thang God made - EVE!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesome and pose deep of our sistah Queenz
    u really took it there
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so beautiful. so touching. what a perfect lesson in learning.
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEG - THANKS AGAIN!!!
     
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    Feeling it through every sensual perception in the body!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tactile. Sensual. Thanks for the read.

     
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