Black Poetry : Lesson Learned

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  1. Carameldlite

    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    I've got so much emotion
    I feel like i'm immersed in it
    And the truth of the matter is
    You really don't deserve it

    I gave you too much too soon
    And that was my mistake
    I gave you just a piece of my heart
    And that, you decided to break

    I should have given your advances
    So much more resistance
    Cuz now I'm stuck with your promises
    That never came into existence

    I was always told to keep my heart
    Until it was well earned
    And now I know those words were true
    Cuz you're my lesson learned
     
  2. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So to the point and so true to life.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word u broke it down here
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Carameldlite:
    Lessons Learned are jewels.
    The key is to know them when you
    see them so you don't repeat history.
    Luvn' this flo poet.


    Much Luv
     
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    robboy2003 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was great poet! I felt you right there. We sometimes feel,that we get played,but there will be better days!:) :welldone: :welldone:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SMASHING!!!
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a lesson we all learned! flo on poet!
     
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