Black Poetry : LESSON LEARNED

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LESSON LEARNED

    Fool evaluation but school graduation follows got fuel for elevation //
    Blew it many times got to do it without any crimes plenty blind hesitations //
    Devastation took my first puff of grass got worse stuff happen fast it was temptation //
    Wimp situation as a sophomore started to ignore mother and father that seem to bother //
    Them smoke grass it choke my grade fast hope was a thing of the past reality got farther //
    Away, my head float like a misled boat thought drift every time I caught a sniff of pot //
    Hot uplift never stop pissed off my pop missed school smoking marijuana crop //
    Slop describes my history drop verse and arrive at this mystery attend class //
    Hung out with friends strung out on different blends of smoke later I grasp //
    Coke, it broke my ability the communicate woke up mornings feeling silly //
    Body felt chilly like fever had struck, bad luck seem to buck not a big Willy //
    Just to pretend to be rust along with the drug stuff swim in my brain //
    Narcotics dim the pain like Novocain spot it in my veins floating lame //
    Fell into depression hell with transgression started dating a chick fine //
    Had a sick mind but a round brown slick behind brag this trick is mine //
    Kind of love design for a thug drink wine in the club kisses her lips hard //
    Scarred my name my report card flame with F’s graded as a retard //
    Lick her say sweet words kick me to the curve that disturbs me much //
    Search for another love could clutch no other lover labeled as scrub out of touch //
    With reality no doubt a fatality **** I missed sally lost in a chase like Starsky and hutch //
    Use a Bic pen to define her kisses in love letters a thug in leathers //
    Feathers flock together felt better doing drugs on the block tackle endeavors //
    Never broke the habit wrote suicidal note in my tablet found by a friend //
    Bound to end my life she told the principal not sensible at first that end //
    Our friendship wasn’t aware that she really care now I share love with //
    Others especially with my sisters and brother never take your life it’s a gift //
    After Weeks of counseling and bouncing facts I graduated very sophisticated //
    On life all the help I got was nice // strife behind me now that I’m educated //

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed the flo of this piece, dear poet. lovin' yo talent, but you know that. i'm still watchin'.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY MADD U WOKE UP IN TYME
    DRUGS KILL DA HEAD BLAST THE
    SOUL AND DA MIND FEEL CHILLS
    OF HEAT .....SOUNDS SILLY
    THATS WHAT DRUGS DO.....
    WHO'S FOOLING WHO......NICE WAKE UP CALL
    TO THE PEOPLES OF LIFE
     
  4. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEEP

    LISTER SCRIBINS YO THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS FOR REAL I TRIED TO CHANGE MY PACE IN THIS RAP RACE THYANKS FOR PEEPING

    $$RICH$$ THANKS FOR THE INSPIRING COMMENT ON THE WAKE UP CALL **** YOU SHARP WITH RECOGINIZING GOALS AGAIN THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT KEEP REPPING
     
  5. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...erful. *In agreement with the RICHNESS*; an, extremely, thorough wake up call...
     
  6. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleXtract THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT I GUESS IT'S A WAKE UPCALL FOR REAL NOW THANKS FOR PEEPING THIS THOUGHT I WAS GONNA BAT A ZERO ON THIS ONE
     
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