Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lesser or More

candeesweet

going above and beyond
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"If You take your opportunities
The moment will come"
Serena Williams to Venus Williams
The names that have been called​
Like literacy​
If it was not the see​
The litter would be worthlessly unfelt​
Then the bottle that falls off the shelf becomes a glass liter​
Literally broken​
Where do we go with a label given to thick headed​
Books of life​
But don't look now​
Cause her liter is horendiously written​
All over the pages​
Even if the literature comes straight​
From her mouth without a badge​
Lite is still given​
Writers in the literal movement​
Move side to side when a famous quote reads like​
"does life make art or does art make love to life"​
Fairness of​
Life & Art meeting @ a moment​
Of literal greatness learned through experiences​
Read in the light first​
But expressed @ the same time​
With literatures of greatness of truth aloud​
In your head​
From their heart​
These moments stay labeled moments​
In time reworked for everyone involved.​
 

Gracious

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"If You take your opportunities
The moment will come"
Serena Williams to Venus Williams
The names that have been called​
Like literacy​
If it was not the see​
The litter would be worthlessly unfelt​
Then the bottle that falls off the shelf becomes a glass liter​
Literally broken​
Where do we go with a label given to thick headed​
Books of life​
But don't look now​
Cause her liter is horendiously written​
All over the pages​
Even if the literature comes straight​
From her mouth without a badge​
Lite is still given​
Writers in the literal movement​
Move side to side when a famous quote reads like​
"does life make art or does art make love to life"​
Fairness of​
Life & Art meeting @ a moment​
Of literal greatness learned through experiences​
Read in the light first​
But expressed @ the same time​
With literatures of greatness of truth aloud​
In your head​
From their heart​
These moments stay labeled moments​
In time reworked for everyone involved.​
AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!!

Especially the part where you said:

"...Where do we go with a label given to thick headed
Books of life..."


WOW!!!

My mind went to soooo many different people & experiences & I'm embarrassed to say ... even thought about myself some?:p


Thoroughly enjoyed reading your creation!
 

candeesweet

going above and beyond
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Aug 20, 2010
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AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!!

Especially the part where you said:

"...Where do we go with a label given to thick headed
Books of life..."


WOW!!!

My mind went to soooo many different people & experiences & I'm embarrassed to say ... even thought about myself some?:p


Thoroughly enjoyed reading your creation!
I can definently feel you.
Loving your creations also!
 

cherellé

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MEMBER
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South Carolina
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"If You take your opportunities
The moment will come"
Serena Williams to Venus Williams
The names that have been called​
Like literacy​
If it was not the see​
The litter would be worthlessly unfelt​
Then the bottle that falls off the shelf becomes a glass liter​
Literally broken​
Where do we go with a label given to thick headed​
Books of life​
But don't look now​
Cause her liter is horendiously written​
All over the pages​
Even if the literature comes straight​
From her mouth without a badge​
Lite is still given​
Writers in the literal movement​
Move side to side when a famous quote reads like​
"does life make art or does art make love to life"​
Fairness of​
Life & Art meeting @ a moment​
Of literal greatness learned through experiences​
Read in the light first​
But expressed @ the same time​
With literatures of greatness of truth aloud​
In your head​
From their heart​
These moments stay labeled moments​
In time reworked for everyone involved.​
Yesssssssss!!! I love this so much. ;)
 

butterfly#1

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Mar 10, 2011
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"If You take your opportunities
The moment will come"
Serena Williams to Venus Williams
The names that have been called​
Like literacy​
If it was not the see​
The litter would be worthlessly unfelt​
Then the bottle that falls off the shelf becomes a glass liter​
Literally broken​
Where do we go with a label given to thick headed​
Books of life​
But don't look now​
Cause her liter is horendiously written​
All over the pages​
Even if the literature comes straight​
From her mouth without a badge​
Lite is still given​
Writers in the literal movement​
Move side to side when a famous quote reads like​
"does life make art or does art make love to life"​
Fairness of​
Life & Art meeting @ a moment​
Of literal greatness learned through experiences​
Read in the light first​
But expressed @ the same time​
With literatures of greatness of truth aloud​
In your head​
From their heart​
These moments stay labeled moments​
In time reworked for everyone involved.​

Candeesweet, ..

Masterfully stated. Bravo, Bravo,.....very well done!

Don't know how I missed this...but so grateful to now be able to read this perfectly written piece!!!
 

candeesweet

going above and beyond
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Aug 20, 2010
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Candeesweet, ..

Masterfully stated. Bravo, Bravo,.....very well done!

Don't know how I missed this...but so grateful to now be able to read this perfectly written piece!!!
Perfectly. stop. I'm really blushing. Thank You butterfly. As u see I used the sisters to inspire me, their perfection leads to mine, I'm guessin'!
 

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