Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lesser or More

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jul 2, 2013.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "If You take your opportunities
    The moment will come"
    Serena Williams to Venus Williams
    The names that have been called​
    Like literacy​
    If it was not the see​
    The litter would be worthlessly unfelt​
    Then the bottle that falls off the shelf becomes a glass liter​
    Literally broken​
    Where do we go with a label given to thick headed​
    Books of life​
    But don't look now​
    Cause her liter is horendiously written​
    All over the pages​
    Even if the literature comes straight​
    From her mouth without a badge​
    Lite is still given​
    Writers in the literal movement​
    Move side to side when a famous quote reads like​
    "does life make art or does art make love to life"​
    Fairness of​
    Life & Art meeting @ a moment​
    Of literal greatness learned through experiences​
    Read in the light first​
    But expressed @ the same time​
    With literatures of greatness of truth aloud​
    In your head​
    From their heart​
    These moments stay labeled moments​
    In time reworked for everyone involved.​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes !!!!!
     
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    AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Especially the part where you said:

    "...Where do we go with a label given to thick headed
    Books of life..."


    WOW!!!

    My mind went to soooo many different people & experiences & I'm embarrassed to say ... even thought about myself some?:p


    Thoroughly enjoyed reading your creation!
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can definently feel you.
    Loving your creations also!
     
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    Thanks you soooo much candeesweet!:thankyou:
     
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    Yesssssssss!!! I love this so much. ;)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am gracious like a member name comes to mind! I appreciate your Love response.
     
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    Your welcome :)
     
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    butterfly#1 going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Candeesweet, ..

    Masterfully stated. Bravo, Bravo,.....very well done!

    Don't know how I missed this...but so grateful to now be able to read this perfectly written piece!!!
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perfectly. stop. I'm really blushing. Thank You butterfly. As u see I used the sisters to inspire me, their perfection leads to mine, I'm guessin'!
     
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