Black Poetry : less words spoken ,but everything said..... (for sweet Grandpa)

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  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ik remembered when Dad introduced you to me
    for the first time.....


    sweetest man..
    smiled ...
    as the Roots spoke Loud...
    i wondered where "'were you all this time"'
    his eyes spoke off "' i was held back to see you "'
    but i am here ....


    my eye saw the Blood that was calling..
    my eyes saw youre situation in a room full ,
    i was singen for you...
    minuts of you and i alone ..
    were the opportunity ,to express how you feel..

    i thank God my dad Took over Stood strong and said..
    ""you have to meet youre Grandpa ,even if she likes it or not...""


    and you were beautifull ,

    "'the Old man On the bike."'
    "'the man digging with his hands in the Earth for his own little harvest''
    "'the man whom Could knock ous out beat us when he woul dance Rock"
    "'the man whom would work hard to feed his family didnt Give up"'
    "' the man Whom Travelled around the world worked On ships and with heavy machines""
    "'the man Whom would Humble himself when it comes to God..."'
    "'the man Whom would Sing ,hey i Probebly God that From dad and Him , ""
    "the Man whom would Follow jezus No matter what people would think of him""


    Next to my Dad...
    and Future husband (?)
    One of the Sweetest man I ever met...


    In the Short time that i got to know him
    because time was stolen from us.......
    and time flys by....

    the bond grew..
    The lord revealed things about the situation and you..
    and why i couldnt see you ..
    it made me more sad than bad..

    "'because love is strong""


    "'why do people do this Why do they "'hold back "","'roots" and say "' i love God"'
    ok there are certain situations ..""safety"' ,
    but this .....no nothing but unmaturity....

    huh..

    as a GrandChild "'what did i do..''?



    The moments we had together were maybe short..
    but they have a lasting value...

    i remember when he sang for me about ""Jezus and You in the rocking boat on the stormy sea""
    put youre trust in him he said ..


    i.ve hold his beautifull hands ..
    they were warm and Precious.
    i was so touched that i could hold them..
    and smell his skin...

    I said to Him "' our time was short but we have the hope

    to see eachother in sion..

    "' he smilled with a Look at the horizon "'i hope he said Yes"' that would be beautifull''
    and smiled...




    dear grandpa ..

    sweet grandpa..



    those moments ..
    there were less words spoken...

    but everything said ....




    that day when he walked me with little steps to the bus when i was about to leave Holland ...
    in a way ,when you bring you daughter to give her away to the bridegroom

    those moments there were less words spoken..

    but everything said...










    even if they would put on the shackles
    the love would brake the iron...
     
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    Da roots run deep !
     
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    It doesn't take many words, to speak truth.
     
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    the last day i could,nt finish it ..


    its a poem for my grandpa whom past away...


    and this is the first time in my life i realy experiance that feeling when someone goes away from ,you ..
    when that someone is dear to you...


    or lests say the person was rooted in you..




    i finished the poem now..

    thanks fam:heart:
     
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    I felt the love you had for him in each verse, as I'm sure he's smiling down upon you now. I am so sorry for your loss.
     
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    i hope

    grandpa understood your feeling for him in the long run

    that means alot to me

    i tell my people i love them i cherish them

    i don't what to wait for the eulogy

    to me that doesn't count

    like them hear it now

    great tribute to grandpa

    and thanks for letting us know what a great man he was


    peace
     
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    A Beautiful Tribute



    My condolences, dear Lady.

    Your expression of remembrance touches our hearts.
     
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