Poetry Critiques : LESBIANS.DATS Y

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  1. sheikdadon

    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :mad: DECEIVED BY A MAN TWICE HER AGE
    HE KNEW SHE WAS GAY SO HE ****** HER WITH GRACE
    HE TOOK HIS TIME AND EARNED HER TRUST
    4HER THE LOVE GREW APART FROM DA LUST
    HIS LIL FREAK SHE SWALLOWED DA *** WENEVA HE BUST
    HE MEANT DA WORLD CUZ HE WAS HA FIRST
    BUT TO HIM SHE JUST SATISFIED HIS THIRST
    HE TURNED HER OUT WITH HIS STYLE N HIS ****
    HE WAS ALL SHE WANTED N WITHOUT HIM SHE WAS SICK
    SHE WAS A N!CCA N STILL HAD A *****
    SHE DIDNT WANT TO BE A NOTCH ON HIS BELT
    HE HAD TO LEAVE N SHE DIDNT NO HOW TO DEAL WIT DA PAIN DAT SHE FELT
    HE DID HER DIRTY SO SHE STAYED WITH A GURL
    DATS Y FEMALES CONVERT N STAY N DA LESBIAN WORLD...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt the message of this twist
    but some words are banish

    good write also i notice how u cuss
    revisit da rules beyond any fuss .....
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, you blew the cover of why SOME women choose alternate lifestyles, we need healing and growth between our sisters and brothers:grouphug:

    PS...that piece was on hittt!

    :couple:
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