Black Poetry : Lennie

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, May 10, 2005.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    what's that in his eyes?
    thunderous roaring inner waves?
    dancing to be free

    creativity
    abounds in myriad forms
    dreaming to be free

    kind, gentle family man is he
    unlike his father..an uprooted tree...
    he's working to be free

    working
    dreaming
    dancing
    loving...
    to BE

    FREE
     
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    it's lennnnnnnnny
    it's lennnnnnnnny...

    word...i can dig this...this is the cat that no one talks about...good ish deepy

    one love
    khasm
     
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    Free Lennie

    I love the way in which this freedom rings true.

    Go Deep! :bowdown:
     
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    the bells are ringing freedom
    this was outstanding here ...
     
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    speak....no :nono: no...sing for independence.......!shout it out! :wink: :wink:

    niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice.....short but sweet!
     
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    Many Lennie's out here just trying to make it from day to day, heroes in their own right. Good to hear from you deepy. Flow on sis.
     
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    Deepy this was very nice. I had different interpretations for 'Lennie'.

    :heart: moham
     
  8. deepy

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    khasm....he says it's lennie....lennie...so there
    thanks for support
    and watz, lurk, lpoetsought and rich...i appreciate your continuous encouragement...
    moham i would be interested in hearing your interpretation...
    I see lennie as a very complexed personality, which is why i worked in the simplist form possible...like the character the outer and inner are nor alaways necessarily the same...please let me know your thoughts...