Black Poetry : lemonade with kiwi slices

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  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    back after a long flight
    i might just make a pitcher a'lemonade
    with fresh lemons and kiwi
    and sip on the things i foresee..........

    hesitation of whatosay
    when i used to just say it all
    away for so long, almost seeming
    afraid to fall, when all i do is
    get back up
    step up
    and overcome adversity
    to the tune of controversy and lustfully
    eating education,
    and regurgitating
    sonnets per your entercation*

    in my absentee-ism
    developed a plantation-
    a civilization from things stirring
    in the "shouldbedoing" drawer
    i fell lower on the totem pole of
    "beingsomebody"
    when the real person was lost
    a long time ago

    still searching on train tracks in
    the opposite direction
    reflections of life eternal
    denying perfection
    stressing today's ignorance
    that influences every prominent generation
    revealing invisible words from hidden
    agendas with no procrastination

    sipping my lemonade with kiwi slices


    *entertainment+education


    a month'a'sundays c.2002
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here was touching and well worthy of the read
    write da knowledge of wisdom a million tymes
    as i take flyte tonight)))>>>>
     
  3. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ovation in order...

    This hea is just calling for applause!!! Ima get me a glass of lemonade and see if I can drop this hot! lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gaboi.


    ...i read this the otha day & now that i've gotten ova
    the shock of actual-ly seein' you back on the page...
    i can formulate a response!! :lol: serious-ly... your
    words have been missed! i enjoyed the read... don't
    stay gone so long next time!! :tongue:

    itsallLove, chile. (i'm still mad at you tho')

    elayne.
     
  5. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    preeshate the ovayshuns people.
    keepcominbak.

    b.e.z.
    hw
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa

    hi-five's and ovations ova here. sho is good to see you back in the heezy fo sheezy my neezy!!!!!!!!!




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  7. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good lookin' poet.
    sorry the break affected my folks.
    hopefully i can drop some fresh words.

    b.e.z. (my neezy)

    ub-zorb-SUM
     
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