Black Poetry : Lemme Tell U How I See It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jan 12, 2004.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lemme break it down for u
    ever since I came around u
    my days seem better
    n my life seems leveled
    without words you bring sunshine
    thats why im hoping we can come together
    u gotta body that makes me wanna faint
    just so i can realize im not dreamin or insane
    i know ur not perfect
    But I hold no suspicion nor do I hold complaints
    Ur presence is heavenly, its gotta be a miracle
    cuz god blessed u with sumthin nice- mind, body, n spiritual
    if ur not an angel with golden wings
    then ur like a fantasy in the physical
    if i gotta climb the highest mountain or swim the deepest sea
    to get close to ur love, then thats how its gonna be
    cuz obstacles are only minor
    when it comes to sumthin major like you and me
    baby, those eyes tell me things that should be illegal if said
    i daydream about u in my arms, dream about u while in my bed
    living without u in my life
    is like walking with the dead
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the declaration :)
    nice vibes
    feeling the happiness
    shining brightly like a
    sunshine from
    your flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes the vibe off this
    i understand this flow
    my little sister
    flow on
    wonderful drop...
    :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head on
    dis was a good read
    love ya style
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feels like you're speaking from the heart...nice flow.
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I know who this is about ;)

    You are always so tight in your flows, girl, even when it's a shorter piece.

    Props.
     
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    verse Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice. i see how you see it.
     
  8. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A very beautiful declaration of love. I hope this lucky person realizes that. Much love to you.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW sista...those last two lines summed it all :)
    somebody's in Lovvveeeeeeeee :D
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...this was deep
    "walking with the dead"
    ....love can have that
    kind of impact, indeed
    love the raw emotion in this piece
     
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