Black Poetry : Lemme see if I can explain this...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Nov 8, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lets see, how do i put this...?
    she's left footprints
    on my heart
    ever since we agreed to start
    a flame to our sparks
    shes a modern day queen
    im like her honored, slave/feen
    addidicted to her high
    I...
    cannot fight the power of ... HER
    my heart beats to the sound of her drums
    shes like the air to my lungs
    her loves comes in doses
    i finally figured out my prognosis
    im love sick...
    proud of this drug, ive been stuck with
    lovin her is like hearin ur favorite song for the first time
    and to know shes lovin me is like...
    hearing a baby speak its 1st words and make its 1st climb
    her voice is like a symphony
    words enter me
    and soul center me
    shes like... like... ****, im speechless
    like the light to my path
    no, no..
    like the pot of gold @ the end of the rainbow
    naw, not good enough...
    shes like the summer breeze in June
    Better yet, like the stars that surround the moon
    I live on cloud 9
    i never get any down time
    I soar on her beauty and knowledge
    i've fallen
    into her soul's callin
    and get this...
    Ive never even had sexual relations with her...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet scribe i was into it flow on
    let me hear more of dis here.......tyte
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you explained it very well
    right down to the last word..
    nice nice very nice:angel1:
     
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    Whoa!

    :jawdrop:

    flaming...the only way I've every know you to flow with it!
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like I said before, baby girl, this is da :bomb:

    :D
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AAAWWWW!!

    thanks yall, appreciate the nice words n love shown. and $$Rich$$ I got some more for ya lol. much love n respect...
     
  7. FloeticFire

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    Sex maybe can come later
    perhaps one May
    when we are so blissful together
    no, no
    So insatiably happy together
    But when it does happen
    I know, I can feel all the passion
    we share platonically will
    surpass all measurable equations
    Cuz she and I will finally be
    One

    Nice...very nice piece family :grouphug:
     
  8. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u and nice flow..

    although ur sn and stuff makes me wonder...
     
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    You have done a superb job at expressing yourself with this one.

    Keep in mind that it's better to love one's soul than to love one's body.

    Sex is just an expression of love, but most people use it as just that, sex.

    Peace.
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    i totally agree... much love n respect...
     
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