Black Poetry : Legends of Love

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  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I despise these lies that creep into my mind
    searching for truths that don't exist
    Causing me sleepless nights and worrisome days
    I've put my faith in you but oh I'm tired
    of always feeling like your fool
    Like in the end its me whose been schooled
    on the heartache and pain all the tricks of the game
    don't mean to be pessimistic so like John "let's get lifted"
    because "heaven only knows" how i'm feeling "again"
    My momma says we're just "ordinary people" and
    Baby just give it a chance
    When we first met you told me, "I can change"
    But you got me sitting at home wondering
    "Where did my baby go"
    Finally we're sitting down and talking and you are "coming home"
    "Each day gets better" as we build up the romance
    "Slow dance" whispering in my ear that this is forever
    I hope and pray that this time will be last
    No more doubting each other and throwing tempers fast
    No more late night arguements about the past
    Now that you've told me I'm "number one"
    We can take the future and run
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    somehow this cascade deep and sound like my life
    have u been peepin in my window !!!!!!!!!!! sometime what we miss is the love
    beyond the drama of thy love .
     
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    going through this right now. and mine told me the same thing to find out he's still running the street. so now were seperated. but its a situation where he keeps running in and out of my lyfe. i can't have that for this year. so my sista keep on praying that no evil or harm disrupts your love of your lyfe. Stay blessed and be blessed!​
     
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    Loved how you incorporated Legend's songs into this piece. Sometimes we have to just concentrate on the love. Tight write.
     
  5. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich you know I peep in your windows every chance I get :p

    Nevar thanks for stopping by and lending me support, I'll pray for me and I'll pray for you too through the lord all things are possible and maybe there's a reasons he's still running in and out of your life.

    watz Thanks for reading, had to think of a new creative spin to put on this and it didn't help that John's been in my cd player none stop ;)
     
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    Your LEGEND leads by example Hon, peace.
     
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    Tyte Drop choclatangel.
     
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