Black Poetry : Legacy!!! If I Were to Propose To You...

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If I were to propose to you
    Would you prefer over a candle lit dinner for two
    Or under the midnight sky
    Along the lakefront
    With the moon shimmering overhead?

    Would you prefer that I propose
    In scribe
    Where my verbiage would paint pictures
    Of my thoughts?
    Or would you prefer I do it in song
    Where I can serenade your heart
    While sliding the diamond of forever on your finger?

    Should I propose while we’re sipping
    Chilled champagne
    Or would you prefer
    Merlot slowly dripping from my lips to yours
    As we kiss gently ?

    If I were to propose to you
    Could you envision the rest of your life filled
    With enchanted bliss
    And your soul being forever kissed?

    If I were to propose to you
    Would doves carry the train of your dress
    While you marched down the aisle
    And would the heavens themselves open
    And bathe us in its radiant light
    As we recite our vows before all to witness?

    Just what would you have me to do
    If I proposed to you?
     
  2. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as good as this sounds, i hope she says yes!! :D nice drop bishop.
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    once again it's on

    tight flow

    pd

    :)
     
  4. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh my goodness!

    Thank you so much....this is soooooooo BEAUTIFUL. For the answer you have to come to Detroit......I'm afraid if I write my answer you & I will both continuing setting the boards on fire, you feel me???
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    write it ! write it !
    set it on blaze
    BISHOP man da house of lights doors open
    and i see somebody in a little boat headed yo way!
    too sweet
    **** tyght
    da vibe ya scribe
    smooth extremely smooth
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bish,

    WTF!!!! Off da planet with this one here dawg!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Are we gonna have a cyber wedding yall?
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just trying to keep the board jumping yall!!!!
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ya cheatin on me, ya cheatin on me!

    I left to take care of business of just a minute and my man done up and found anotha lova...ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lawdy, I think I 'm gone have to go on the rebound, I'm gone have to put that red dress on and my high heel sneaka's and find myself a partime love...No but, really this was so sweet and the rhythm was superb!
    Dang Legacy! See you on Jerry Springer....:argue: :argue: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
     
  10. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know I gots nothing but luv for ya msluciousb!!!!!
     
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