Black Poetry : LEFT UP TO US

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, Jun 18, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is love and there is hating
    Little giving and more taking
    There is good and there is evil
    Plenty of doubt and few believers
    There is comfort and there is pain
    Who do we blame?
    There is innocent and there is guilt
    Every foundation has to be built
    There is rich and there is poor
    Guess who keeps wanting more
    There is lying and there is understanding
    To your surprise only a few does the planning
    There is followers and there is leaders
    Profiteers become the cheaters
    There is power and there is weak
    Programmed minds love their sleep
    There is trust and there is fake
    Being the fool only to realize too late
    There is you and there is me
    The chains are there are you really free
    Understand these words they are real
    If they continue to control us soon we'll have to
    STEAL WHAT WE FEEL
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up u said it all in this flow
     
  3. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just putting together a few words
    BE SAFE
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The give and take of life...the in's and out's of life...what a life we live. wonderful job on this piece.
     
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    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks you
    living in word
    BE SAFE
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very very deep and well thought out.
     
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    The give and take of life, it's up to us to choose wisely, deep scribe, as always.
     
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