Black Poetry : Left Unwritten

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  1. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanted to write his name
    Speaking it in poetics
    Like tender licks
    An iquana's tongue
    Tickling my eardrum
    Eye candy to see him
    This thick lipped Queen
    In admist of a dream....
    Then the light turned green
    I couldn't find a pen
    I couldn't even pretend
    I was trying to Kodak
    The Memorex image of his spirit

    I wanted to write his smile
    Have it stay awhile on my mind
    The way you pray sometime
    Joy stays planted
    Like the harvested moments
    Never should he be forgotten
    He was already between my thighs
    He had already kissed my lips
    He already began to slip in the abyss
    Yet my pencil tip was broken
    No sharpener in sight
    Pen not writing right
    Afraid my words for him
    Just be a big Blur by the time
    I made it home
    Alone
    He would not be there

    I wanted to write his stare
    Dare I'd stare right back
    Poetics in tact
    Scribbles and scratched
    Trying to get Black
    To the moment he caught
    My look of love
    But my ink pen wouldn't document
    Moments that are not meant to be written
    Only meant to be moments
    Of him I want to write
    By tonight he will have soared
    Further away in my mind
    Some other time I suppose
    I'll catch a glace again...
    I'll be inspired again
    I'll find that place within
    I'll remember him
    Write?
     
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    but yet in yo mind

    u mesmerize the unwritten song
    and sing in gleam poetic theme....:)
     
  3. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes the best memories are the one's only left to the imagination!
    Thank You! :kiss:
     
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    IN TIME.....IF IT IS MEANT TO BE WRITTEN...you wil and the moment will be as vivid to you as though it happened yesterday........mindblowing! The Brain is
    the thang ! You write in your brain, the process from the brain
    to the paper is 99% inspiration and about one per cent perspiration set it free!!!!One Love and Blessings On U
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    roxanne, there are so many lines in this piece that i am just lovin'....keep on scribin', gurl.
     
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    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you...

    I love to be inspired and then realize later that I really was...
    :kiss:
     
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