Black Poetry : leaving nothing out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lovealexandria, Jan 21, 2009.

  1. lovealexandria

    lovealexandria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Leaving nothing out
    My pen sings my cries
    It strikes my enemies
    Loves my lovers
    And dreams my dreams
    It conducts music
    In rhythm and rhyme
    Of everything I feel inside
    And if anything I feel collides
    With what others see
    I try not to hide
    How much of me has died
    As a sacrifice
    From yielding to the will of my pen
    Exposing all of my sin
    The torture of my soul
    For the lack of words to explore
    Feeding comfort to the empty soul
    Feeling nothing I can’t express
    And expressing everything I feel
    Leaving nothing in my chamber
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can agree with that pen, ..and yes, it sometimes is mightier than the sword! I can feel your drop sis...thanks for sharing it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen striking musical notes here ...loving it
     
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    Our pen can release our soul to the paper, indeed, and I fully appreciate the expressive flow of your pen. Well done.
     
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    free2b_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEY SISTA, THIS WAS GREAT. LOVED IT. AS ALWAYS, YOU ALWAYS PEN NICE POEMS. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    listen to da PEN...

    ...let the river flow.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dont deny your pen my sister
    it would seem :read:
    it has much to say :read:
    :)
    cant wait for more!
     
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