Black Poetry : leave me - at last

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by bahati, Jul 8, 2003.

  1. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    where ever I go -
    you are in my heart;
    what ever I do -
    you ARE in my heart;
    who ever I'm with -
    you are in my thoughts;
    who ever I kiss -
    I compare their lips to yours;
    what ever my plans -
    you are still part of them;
    what ever I dream of -
    you are part of it;
    cause you - like no one else before -
    took possession of my heart,
    swallowed it up,
    nibbling on my soul,
    consuming every little bit of my body,
    munching on every fibre that I consist of,
    exhausting me, leaving me with no substance,
    an empty shell, hollow envelope,
    or nothing left of me at all.
    spit me out again,
    give me back me,
    give me back my love,
    give me back my life,
    say you hate me,
    say you don't care,
    say you don't ever wanna see me
    or talk to me again.
    but don't keep me captured,
    don't keep my everything
    though you don't want me anyway.
    Release me, set me free.
    please
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear you. Speaking here. Bahati

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    Release the heart . Let it be free. It takes years to recover from loves touch. You go into spins when the heart is taken prisoner.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's amazing how love will do this to you - take possession of the mind, heart, body and soul...feeling your flow, bahati.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes love works in ways like a mystery
    as it captyres ya heart , mind and soul
    tyte scribe
     
  5. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    thanks to y'all. posting my thoughts here helps me so much. love to everybody
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise unto u as well .....happy u made us apart of u
     
  7. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    *bigsmile* i'm so grateful of being accepted as a part of the destee family. again thanx
     
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    munching on every fibre that I consist of,

    wow that was a tight lyric, feel u all the way:toast: :toast: :kiss:
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this. Going through sumthin like this right now. Keep em coming
     
  10. bahati

    bahati Active Member MEMBER

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    hi alize definitely hear ya. read some of your art - luv it. we can be strong together girl :love:
     
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