Black Haiku : learning vanu....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Sep 15, 2007.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    a question please...note that i have tried this form in two ways
    syllables and words...help me understand which is correct...?
    thanks
    deepy


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    is it 5 syllables, or 5 words first line
    thn 4 syllables or 4 words 2nd line, etc..?


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    The first one is correct using da 5 syllables format and so forth on
    which forms da flying ~V~ (vankwish) or (Vanwqish) once centered this nu-wave
    of creation is taking hold worldwide it's an 15 syllable brotheren of the
    17 syllable Haiku

    Vaniku is da Vankwish flying ~V~

    Thank u for trying my Nu~wave creation please continue to master this form
    and help it move into da world of poetic verses and poets mind of writting !
     
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