Black Poetry : Learning to

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Feb 18, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a new born day
    Learning to take it in as
    it is giving not searching
    as I stop askin myself way
    And letting it just flow
    Through my veins inside
    my soul and floatin in my spirit ….
    My song use to be
    Love don’t love no body
    And it left me out in the rain….
    Folding in the mud as this rose dies

    But like a new born day
    It came fast
    Twisted me up as it
    held me tight
    turn my dark heart
    To light and shine all
    the day long a sweet sensation
    that cant be explain…..
    My song use to be
    Love don’t love no body
    And it left me out in the rain….
    Folding in the mud as this rose dies

    But just as a new day
    I opened up my heart
    To feel the love and
    the blessing I have received
    in an enchanting way as
    he feeds my soul
    and holds my spirit
    and take me as I am……
    washed my pain away
    and healed my achy heart
    as my dreams set free……

    the angels sing
    the moon bows
    and every nite
    the stars gleam
    and the sun for
    ever raise….see

    My song use to be
    Love don’t love no body
    And it left me out in the rain….
    Folding in the mud as this rose dies
    Now its somebody forever body
    As the sun came up and ME his rose
    Begins to bloom with a vibrant
    Glow and bold full petals of red
    Seeking within and releasing
    Whats of me to reach and give back
    I stop askin why…….

    Like a new born day
    Learning to take it in as
    it is giving…..
    A love of my own.......

    A blkangel thang....2004
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "stop asking why"
    I hear ya sista I too feel your sentiments completely
    your growth is evident
    :grouphug:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice and well felt
    indeed the asking is answered
    in the continue growth of your
    own in your own surely it speaks
    out .....flow on as u muse
     
  4. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I completely hear what you're sayin, sister, and you threw this down so beautifully. Much love.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool, very cool. You wrote his beautifully.
     
  6. Khasm13

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    nice piece you laid down
    i agree with triniti, you have grown
    one love
    khasm
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424..and..Khasm13.....awww you guys are to much

    $$RICH$$..glad ya can feel it indeed continue growth

    gempis....so happy u enjoyed this

    kente417mojo....happy u enjoyed

    thank each of you for the support and love
    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how can the gates of love not open up for a beautiful...Black Angel ? the best is yet to come. Just spread your wings wide and let it come in...you're much deserving of it. I like and feel that d-e-e-p piece...thanks for sharing. :)
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a wonderful piece angel
    flow on
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Growth comes to those who allow it, I like the way you flowed with this.
     
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