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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ExquisitesOne, Jan 19, 2003.

  1. ExquisitesOne

    ExquisitesOne New Member MEMBER

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    Love's Ride

    Where has my love taken me?
    A broken heart and a skinned up knee.
    You see, sometimes it's like climbing a tree
    you think you're on a strong branch,
    but it breaks, next thing you know,
    the sky's the only thing in your face.

    I met this guy once, said he was different,
    he'd never do what the other's did,
    took my love and ain't seen him since.
    Met this one man on my way to school,
    he had a shiny new car and just talked so cool,
    drove me around in circles and dropped me off at the shallow end of loves swimmin' pool.
    Now I met this one dude, he told me he was a stud.
    He wore these pretty, fine clothes, and said he had all his fabulous cars lined up in a row...
    I coulda had more fun watchin' the grass grow.

    Oh well, it's back to Love's drawing board I guess,
    Where has my love taken me you ask?
    Well, to the heart of experiences' treasure chest
    (lookin' at it in a good way is best).
    Anyway, I'm off to take another risk...
    Excuse me while I go reel in the next fish.
     
  2. ExquisiteBalla

    ExquisiteBalla Member MEMBER

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    Definitely feeling your poetic skills
    Your relational insight
    The way you bring words to light
    Your poems could never be "just aiight"
    You'll always be my eye's delight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    open flow of men on da go
    ya love took u to a new beginning
    if ya heart is able & willing
    u learn in time
    as time moves on ya love
    awaits u at a Queens throne
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOVING THIS...TOO BAD WE HAVE TO GO THROUGH SO MANY TO GET THE GOOD FISH.......I'M STILL FISHING TOO!
     
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    From the get, i loved this piece!

    Exquisite One wrote:

    "Where has my love taken me?
    A broken heart and a skinned up knee.
    You see, sometimes it's like climbing a tree..."

    Aint that the truth, write on my exquisite one Write ON!!!!

    p.a.,
    byin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so true and the truth
    but in time one will heal
    and then meet the one of her thrill

    I believe..............
     
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