Black Poetry : Learning about Mistakes..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Mar 14, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He doesnt punish
    We punish ourselfs..
    but he will kick youre
    ***.....

    Imagine you are a little
    stone lying there on a
    path in a Park...
    And god passes by ..
    taking a nive fresh walk.
    He sees you lying there ..
    and.....
    Kicks youre ***!

    There you go 8 meters forward
    up in thee air....
    You bounce 2 /3 times .
    at the floor
    So the bouncing hurts
    You made a mistake..
    Sumthimes it hurts you only...
    Sumthimes it only hurts others..
    Sumthimes both....
    Sumthimes its not so bad..
    Sumthimes its verry bad....
    But the Baddest thing that
    can happen is if you dont recodnise
    or see or feel what the cause is....
    or recodnise or see or feel the
    consequences that will come out
    from the Mistake.....

    When the time will come..
    or even trough this life..
    he will show us all...........
    what we do wrong...
    and what we do right..

    Jezus died for our sins...
    How Miraculous and Real Love
    that is..
    Every day is a new biggining..
    Stay close to God..
    Learn from youre mistakes...
    Sumthimes the soft way ...
    Sumthimes the hard way...
    but learn..

    cause he will kick youre ***!
    ..
     
  2. daya

    daya Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really like you words they were deep and I under stand what you write peace DAYA....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's all about thinking before acting coz one simple
    mistake can hurt in many wayz ......I feel u and well understood
     
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    liberty.


    now... you said sumthin' here!! :)

    it's true... sometimes He does have to
    be a bit forceful in teaching us lessons.
    but! these are our trials & without them
    we will never know that He can bring us
    thru!! :) thank you for sharing.

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks daya Rich and Elayne.....
    for understanding and feeling tha poem....this caunts for every human being on this earth..
    me..you us everybody all........
     
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