Black Poetry : League of my own

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Deeplyrooted06, Jun 7, 2006.

  1. Deeplyrooted06

    Deeplyrooted06 Member MEMBER

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    You ain’t supposed to listen to this unless you can
    Mono
    Heel-toe
    Or thizz to it
    Poetry lovers probably won’t listen to me
    Unless I’m hittin’ re-re-repeat
    On one of my signature pieces
    Or feedin’ you some bull feces’ about
    Revolutions that don’t even exist outside the venue.
    But let them other poets pretend to
    send you through lands of lexicon and rhymezones
    Cause I’m tryin’ to connect the throne to yo’ soul
    So if you a three poem typea slam poet this would be a great time to fold
    Before I up the ante and straight flush yo ****
    Or expose the fact you been ridin’ some otha poets ****
    I hope you catch verbal syphilis
    For doin anotha poet’s genius raw dog and then give it ur remix
    Maybe that’s why I don’t fit in a mix of gossips and false profits
    and my advice is; if you’re only that nice cause you infringe on artist copyrights
    you need to drive to a bridge, take out your pen and drop it
    cause you gotta spit straight from yo’ soul for us to be able to compete
    and you still wouldn’t win even if you had ten scribes, twenty scientist & DNA strands
    to clone me
    you’ll never be able to decipher the--
    three hundred an’ fifty seven secrets of the temple known to me
    cat’s tend to think I’m wrapped up in a dutch cause I speak words so potentially
    but I spit flames so spirits can all “LIGHT UP” and inhale this poetry
    That’s why I’m in a league of my own
    There’s no need for division titles and championships
    Who else you know can own the team, start the game and ride the bench
    JUST CAUSE I LIKE TO BE THE SIXTH MAN,
    I even think that’s why god gave me a 6th sense
    So I can whisper things like, “I hear lame poets that don’t make sense.”
    And I’mma stand on stage and spit poems until we all forget they exist
    Or until they grab their pad’s and pencils and admit to me they quit
    Cause they named me a bile movement but for short called me the ****
    That’s why I’m harder than never goin’ to calculus
    And then waitin’ until the night before finals to cram
    Now when I’m in the venue…..who tha **** want’s ta SLAM?
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deeplyrooted06
    That is what this is. Deep.

    Maybe that’s why I don’t fit in a mix of gossips and false profits
    and my advice is; if you’re only that nice cause you infringe on artist copyrights
    you need to drive to a bridge , take out your pen and drop it
    cause you gotta spit straight from yo’ soul for us to be able to compete

    I like how you flowed and kept the momentum. Brother you are very talented. Near the end you really picked up the flow.

    I even think that’s why god gave me a 6th sense
    So I can whisper things like,

    “I hear lame poets that don’t make sense.”

    And I’mma stand on stage and spit poems until we all forget they exist

    Or until they grab their pad’s and pencils and admit to me they quit

    Cause they named me a bile movement but for short called me the ****

    That’s why I’m harder than never goin’ to calculus
    And then waitin’ until the night before finals to cram
    Now when I’m in the venue…..who tha **** want’s ta SLAM?

    Great flow Deeplyrooted06, welcome to Destee.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa heavy and indeed deep ya flow was heard cross da land.
     
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